R*Novice Reivew: GuardC

Novice Review:

Decent plot so far, but its got some stuff i think you could work on before ranking up!

Your terrain is decent, but its a bit too smooth in some places, so try and rough it up a bit more to make it seem more natural.

Your structures need more depth and detail to them as of now. Theyre generally flat, so try to add more layers to them to give your build some depth, and use stairs, slabs, fences or even buttons to detail your builds accordingly as you have done on some them already. Be careful with over detailing though. Over detailing can make a build seem messy and unfinished :)

Your organics are nice but require a little work as well. first, try and smooth out your tree so i cant see the world-edit spheres. Also, when you do the leaves, try to have a higher percentage of air in your brush.
(example: //br sphere 20%leaves,80%air)
Doing something like that makes the tree fluffier and seem more tree like! (make sure to do //mask air before you use the brush though! The masking makes it so that the brush doesnt affext blocks that are in its way!)
Lastly, your skeleton is pree cool, but doesnt fit the plot all too well. So try and work around it, or work it in the build more :) P.S, its head is upside-down :p

Hope this helps!