01 - https://streamable.com/pxkzu - previous episodes have had "perpetual thermal power plant" if you recall, but the audio here sounds different. "everlasting perpetual" is hilariously redundant; any suggestions?
02 - https://streamable.com/w3253 - I assume she's quoting a common saying. does it map better to something else in english? funi has "all things must pass" which works nicely context-wise but doesn't seem like a saying to me. kodansha has "nothing is permanent" which I kinda like
03 - https://streamable.com/vchhf - is he also referring to his own eventual death (and thus being reunited or something), or just the two past ones (i.e. they live on in his heart)?
04A - https://streamable.com/5usdw - should "we" and "you" be singular/plural? could it go either way?
04B - how incredulous is arthur? "I mean, *I* don't even believe it.", but that's a bit repetitive with this version of the previous line
05 - https://streamable.com/k5e4j - how're the middle two sentences here? I don't really like "distinct", for starters; what's a literal interpretation?
06A - https://streamable.com/tc0vj - (context: https://streamable.com/01nw9 -- this is also what he's talking about in 05) I really don't know what to do with arthur's line; I'd be happy with "We heard it or something!" or something, but that still needs another sentence and I don't know what would work
06B - is Vulcan saying that they're especially weird, or that they're just like the others
07 - https://streamable.com/gxroe - would like to be more specific with first line -- is third line okay?
08 - https://streamable.com/954te -are "distraction" and "outmatched" okay?
09 - https://streamable.com/6bppl - is this the same "bonanza" from episode 14? considering using "serendipitous" here; kodansha and dub do
10 - https://streamable.com/s1hdj - bit confused here. "like this" and "other than" are contradictory; the workshop people wouldn't have been able to fend for themselves, but this suggests they weren't expecting ADDITIONAL fighters. what?
11 - https://streamable.com/n4p09 - literal TL? kodansha has https://i.imgur.com/tT7v8qU.png which seems completely different