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xDraghun

BaymaxisBae Plot Review

Aug 22nd, 2015
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  1. Hello!
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  3. My name is xDraghun, and I will be reviewing your plot today. You should already know about the 3 major criteria that is needed for you to rank and how well represented they need to be shown on your plot. If you are getting this review, your plot submission probably didn't get accepted.
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  5. «Ranking up»: Your plot must higher than initiate standards and show more development w/ building and a higher form of detail/effort.
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  7. Here are a few examples of novice plots that have ranked up:
  8. http://gyazo.com/dccf20b520122bd2c19017c740f82c7e
  9. http://gyazo.com/b787d050c2987a62bfc241d4ac51f370
  10. http://gyazo.com/3b6613171d59f061b34dafe20e3cf75e
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  12. «Review»: Your terrain could use some smoothing and terraforming because it looks unnatural. Like literally the sides and some other aspects are flat. The panes/banners on your waterfall/stream look weird. Your structures lack depth and detail, and have differing block palettes. You should add trees to your plot. Your *fly things look weird. Your balloon needs some better detailing.
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  14. Hopefully you can make the few adjustments that are needed for you to rank up to aspirant and I(or any other moderator) look forward to your next plot submission! :D
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