Tayter_Kat

Soccaro_D_Chibi

Aug 23rd, 2015
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  1. Hallo there Soccaro_D_Chibi, This is your Aspirant review.....
  2. Before you start reading, I would like to state that as the ranks get more advances, I am more harsh when grading. Please do not take this to heart. Take this as a learning experience<333
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  4. Structure:
  5. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some great structures, but none of them have a lot of depth for me to grade you on. I recommend getting rid of one of the gazebos or reworking one to make it have depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth by incorporating stairs, fences, slabs, trap doors, and buttons. If you need a visual example of depth, you are welcome to visit /warp depthtutorial. If shows you have to add depth and some bad examples.
  6. Organics:
  7. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have an ample amount of trees all around your plot, which is great!!! One thing I do have to comment on is that the two different kinds of trees throw it of( only because one is realistic and the other is not). If you make them all similar, it might make the plot more compatible. Also, make sure the trees are proportional. Some of the roots are way to long to make it seem like a realistic tree.
  8. Terrain:
  9. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is great for an aspirant plot! I would go all around your plot to make sure everything I smooth because I see some areas that could be smoothed out. Also. in some areas you have grass and flowers, and other spaces have non of this. I would make sure also of your plot matches because it looks very sloppy in generally. Go all around to make sure everything matches and is smoothed out.
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  11. Fix the things mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
  12. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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