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- Hello KingofCrystals!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your plot has some decent depth and unappealing detailing. I wouldn't recommend using chiseled stone brick for detail unless u add more blocks for detailing such as stairs or slabs. I have noticed that you used a LOT of chiseled brick as well. It has a kind of repetitive design too.
- Your tree is nice especially since its custom made, but it's weird how it's laying on top of your structure. I mean, u could put it there but u didnt really execute it well. Also its weird how the leaves encase the branches when trees dont really do that.
- As for your terrain, u have none. I suggest making mountains/hills since its commonly used for initiate.
- I think you need to put more effort into your plot. It also needs to be redesigned based on all the chiseled stone brick you used. Good Luck and I hope u have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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