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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot, but theres like 2 things i think you should work on before you rank up! Okay maybe like 3
- First, i like your structure, but the bit in the middle with the slabs doesnt seem to fit, so try and mix it up maybe!
- Your trees are decent, though theyre a bit boxy, to smooth them out and make em more tree-like :) Adding different sizes of trees would also help with the space above the river.
- Last i wanna talk about the terrain, its pretty good, but instead of it just abruptly ending, add some blocks to make it more of a slope. Also the terrain may be too smooth as well, so rough it up a bit!
- (Sidenote, your bridge looks like its going to fall down on the sides, so maybe beef those up x3)
- Good luck!
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