xDraghun

TTT_Kaka Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
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  1. Hello TTT_Kaka!!!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start of with your structure.
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  5. You structure is really small even with the plot you're given, and It's lacking depth and detail. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for a visual explanation. Try to make another structure with the extra space you have and make your structures a little bigger.
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  7. You draghun is pretty good for an initiate but it needs some work. The top of the head has a lot of stairs and it doesn't really compliment the draghun. The nose looks pretty flat but i wont blame you sinces its the edge of your plot. try to use quartz stairs instead of sandstone stairs for the teeth. The neck also looks way to skinny based off of how big you made the draghun's head. Then again, I'm not an organics expert, but I believe you should work on theses things.
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  9. You terrain is ok, but it doesn't really look natural. The top is really good, but then it suddenly just becomes flat at the side. Usually mountains/hills don't just stahp randomly at the side. Although, I like the impression you've made by making it seem that the draghun is bashing it's head through the terrain. Try to use another block with teh terrain that compliments the netherrack because the netherrack by itself is flat and plain.
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  11. I think you still need to work a little bit more on your plot even though all the effort you have shown with your dragon. Hopefully you are able to rank up sooner than later. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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