2016-06-03 Writing: bad restaurant writing

Greg Malivuk
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Homework: p. 146 part B - Pick (or invent) a terrible restaurant and write an outline that explains why it’s so terrible

What are some conclusion sentences you could use for this paragraph?

For these reasons, I don’t recommend this restaurant to anyone.
…, I will never return to this restaurant again.
…, when I came to the restaurant, I felt the end of the world.
…, I would never recommend this restaurant to my worst enemy.
Even if I were starving, I wouldn’t choose this restaurant.
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Using complete sentences and transition signals from yesterday, write a complete paragraph from the outline you finished as homework.