Tayter_Kat

Initiate Review

Jun 23rd, 2015
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  1. Hello CadenTheSaiyan, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Building/Structure:
  4. Your structure is fine, but it is lacking depth. Try adding more stairs/slabs to your build. It looks like you have started on a bit of depth, but its nothing that adds the the build. You can also add more interior to0 since it is such a big build.
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  6. Terrain/Organics:
  7. Well, your tree is good, you can add another if you would like. The terrain is also a bit flat, make it smooth but less flat in the areas that are so. This is by adding more hills and craters to the outside.
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  9. Good Luck!
  10. -Tayter_Kat
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