General nobodies bothered me build order against heavy marine tank play and no/few hellions.
**after an item explains why it is done that way


2nd ovie sent to front to scout for SCV
**this allows any bunker rushes to be handles with a few pulled drones
15 hatch
**Macro is good and if being greedy is safe, be greedy
15-17 pool depending on map size and what I see.
**if its a small map or if his SCV is already pokeing around get a fast pool, otherwise delay a bit
Build a drone after pool
**this just makes timings nicer all around
Take geyser
**early geyser is only for speed nothing else
2 queens when pool pops
**Armoured units are nice, AA is nice, injects are nice, queens are nice
2 ling sets
**haveing an eye on the opponent is crucial for reactive defence.
@100 gas get ling speed
pull all but 1 drone from gas
**if they all just sit in there you just get about 150-200 gas way to early, drones are better.
another queen when the first finishes for creep spread
**Creep spread is good. Fast dedicated creep spread is better
@bling nest finish 10-12 lings to morph into blings should the terran move out
**I think this is insanely nice, if they move out then the blings morph while their in motion, if not I havent wasted the resources on units I don't need.
take third and macro hatch in whatever order feels safe/possible
**Macro is good and around this time Things are looking close to being saturated.
@100 gas morph lair
**The lair marks the beginning of a fast transition into tech
put 2 drones back into geyser
Take 3 other geysers.
2 evo chambers
1/1
saturate third
@lair finish put down spire
bling speed when afordable
**all this tech suddenly falls into place while the third is saturated.
@9:00 make sure spines are morphing to defend drops
**drops are bad, with a few spines terran loses more than they gain with them.
@ around 70 drones go full into ling muta bling and harass with mutas when they pop, (FORCE TURRETS OR THORS); always have an expo morphing
**once the income is situated go straight into army production on 4 bases.



Changes:

Many of your critisizms are a result of bad play and being sloppy with my build, like creep spread and map control.  Still a solution is nessessary so since both creep tumors and injects both cost 25 energy I will spread creep every inject cycle.

Upgrades are adressed in my build but will be given new priority over other things to ensure they are given adequite attention.

I can't move out with the 10-12 lings I have at home since they may be needed for blings, but while the third is morphing a few ling sets could be made to spread across the map.

Once baneling speed starts I'll start overlord speed, then burrow when it finishes.

If I kill a decent sized army I will move out with some mutas and whatever lings morphed during the engagement as a kind of counter.