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- Novice Review:
- Great plot so far, but theres some fine tuning your plot needs before its ranked.
- Your terrain is good, I like the variation of blocks and the detail thats gone in to it.
- The structure is good, but it seems just a little too slabby at the moment. Just a tad x3 The pillars of fire are a little over used in the back, so you may want to cut a few out. Also, try to add some more depth in the build pushing a few layers of the build inward, or pulling some out!
- Side note: Adding more towers around the empty space to match your build could also be a good idea x3 JS
- Your organics are okay, but theyre generally pretty small. Try to add more organics that are a bit larger to those on your plot. Just so can see that youre capable.
- Good luck!
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