fanaticallizard's Spark Review!

Hi there fanaticallizard! I'm HeyItsElla, a Junior Mod on Sunfury and i'll be doing your review today.

So, I don't see the need to explain the whole idea of Terrain, Organics and Structure to you seeing as you seem to have a good idea of what those all mean, which is awesome. Just in case you don't know what I am talking about because you know the terms in different words, terrain is the environment in the plot, the organics are the natural things that are in your plot, and the structure are the things that would have been built by people in your plot.

First of all, I do really like your plot! When I look at the house I can imagine it to be in the fields in the country side, and I can see that there is thought out detail in the walls of the house. This means that rather than having flat walls with a singular block, you have walls with many layers of detail. Please keep this up! But don't fall into the trap of slab spamming, as it won't look good when you use it on ember plots.

The terrain is cute! I'm glad that you have used various blocks to colour the grass, rather than just having the grass block. I like the hill that you've put in the corner, I'd personally just like to see the areas around the house raised more. Raise the hill some more so it's a little taller! Apart from that it's good.

Organics? Hmm... I know Thumbore created the tree's for you and I'm not a fan of that. The actual tree style is nice, but I'd love to see what you could do! You now know what style of tree you should try and replicate, so please have ago! You have nothing to loose, and if you need some help with getting the style right, I'd be happy to give you a tutorial.

The main thing holding me back from ranking you up to Ember is the fact that Ace and Thumbore helped you with your plot. If you can remove what they have done and replace it with your own work, aswell as work on the few details, I'm sure any of the mods would be more than happy to rank you up to Ember!

Thank you!

~HeyItsElla