Grandfatherfox

Hello GrandfatherFox, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You do not have any major structures on your plot. Maybe, to fit your theme, I suggest adding some sort of business building or maybe a tiny shack to your plot, but then again these are only suggestions. When building the structure, make sure you add depth and detail to the outside. Depth is the layers with in a building to make is more interesting. You can add depth to any building by incorporating stairs, fences, or slabs in or on a wall. Detail is the features on a building that make it go a step further than before. You can add detail by adding trap doors and buttons to the sides of a building, or any other structure. Also, make sure the block type varies and isn't just wood or stone. The materials can vary in types of blocks (like just wood, stone, glass etc.) but they should have a theme instead of random blocks places together and called a structure.
Organics:
   This is anything living, like animals and trees. You do not have any organics, so try adding them around your plot. Trees are the easiest, so try sticking to that. You have to make your own trees, also known as custom trees, onto your plot. Try making the trunk smooth and not to boxy or square. The leaves should be the right amount on the branches and should not be boxy either.
Terrain:
   This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. some of your terrain is very flat, try making it more uneven like there is construction going on. Also, you can add different blocks besides stone and diamonds. <ix it with possibly cobble, gravel, dirt, etc. to make it more real.

Good Luck<3
Tayter_Kat  |  Octovon Mod