Tayter_Kat

nav531

Jul 4th, 2015
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  1. Hello nav531, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You build is alright, but it is lacking in depth and detail. Depth is the layers within a building/wall. You can add depth by incorporating fences, slabs, and stairs into a structure. Detail is the small features on something that give it a bit of character. You can add detail by placing buttons and trap doors on any build to make it unique. Both of these will make more realistic and will look more interesting.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals or trees. Trees are the easiest to make as an initiate, so lets focus on that. Your tree is top heavy. If you shorten the tree, it might look better off. Also add branches to make the tree seem bigger instead of a simple circle and a trunk. Make sure the tree and leaves are proportional instead of it having to big of a trunk or very few leaves.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Most of your terrain is a bit flat. If you add some small hills and craters all along your plot, it might add to the realism of the plot.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything that does not fit into any of the previous categories above. You have a lot of empty space on your plot that is going to waste. If you add more trees, small structures, lake, fountain, another house, etc. Adding more to the plot will fix this problem.
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  12. Good Luck<3
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Jr Mod
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