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- Hello jazztigga!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- It looks plain and is lacking depth/detail/color. Right now, it mostly consist of only cobble related blocks. Try to add more blocks to it for variation and color. Add stairs/slabs to the wall for detailing and make ur structure bigger so u can push in the wall for depth. for more reference, go to ./depthtutorial. Your ships is a little small based on how much extra space you have. Try to make it bigger and more detailed.
- Your tree is really nice especially since its custom. It also uses space effectively. Its a little weird how the logs show at the top though. You even added the roots and branches which is a big plus.
- Your terrain is really plain and is mostly water. You didnt even change the ground to another block and left it grass. Try to make hills/mountains since you have so much extra space and change the ground underwater to blocks such as sandstone/sand/birch wood/ etc.
- Overall, your plot still needs soem work before i rank you. Try to elaborate on my suggestions and youll rank it no time.
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