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- Novice Review:
- Decent plot so far, but its going to need a bit of work before you can rank up!
- Your terrain is decent, and i like the amount of detail you put in it with the vines and crops and such. Its not too smooth which is good, and theres a nice variation of blocks.
- However, the structures on the plot need a lot of work. The netherbrick structures are almost exactly the same, other than there being a small world-edit hiccup on the side of the lower structure. Give your structures some meaning to them and make them bigger. The terrain is overpowering your structures and it looks a little off. Make sure to add proper depth to them by adding layers to them. Also, make sure to add proper detailing to them, with slabs, stairs, fences, buttons etc. Be careful with detailing though. You can over detail, and that can lead to slab-spam and awkward structures.
- The trees are decent, but try scaling the big one down a bit. Its also overpowering the plot, and you want your plot to have a good balance. Other than that your trees are pretty decent. Though you might want to add more.
- Hope this helps, and good luck!
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