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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot, but it needs some work before it can rank up
- Your terrain is decent, but it could be better. It seems a bit messy in some places, and the surplus of crops doesnt do the terrain too much good. Adding more blocks like lime stained clay or green wool in to your grass will give your terrain more variation and you wont need all those crops.
- Its also a bit too smooth in some places, so try and rough it up a bit more to make it all uniform.
- Your structures are okay, but they generally lack detailing and depth. Use stairs, slabs, fences or even buttons to accent your builds and detail them appropriately. Adding multiple layers to the builds will give them more depth and a sense of deepness.
- Your organics are okay, but need some work. The tree in the middle has a very odd shape to it. Its too straight going up, and at the bottom its way too thick. The branches need some smoothing but overall good shape for those. The size of the leaves compared to the size of the tree is decent too. The trees in the corners need some work as well.
- The trees in the middle of the plot look bonemealed.
- Lastly, you dont need lanterns everywhere to light everything up. Find some good places for them and only light up certain areas to give your plot more of an atmosphere.
- Hope this helps
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