HepatidusC's spark review

Hi HepatidusC! I'm HeyItsElla, a JuniorMod and I'll be reviewing you today.

So, your plot shows that you do have a basic understanding of how this all works, which is good. There is creativity, which is also good. However, your plot needs some things to enable us mods to uprank you.

Terrain, organics and structure.

The terrain is the environment on your plot. This ranges from valleys and rivers, to lakes and mountains. Your terrain needs improving, try adding a hill and making the valley with the river deeper and wider. You also need to have a variation in the blocks that you use for your terrain.

The organics on a plot are all things that are natural, ranging from tree's and flowers to vines and bamboo forests. You need more organics on your plot, add some tree's, bushes, more flowers and the like. Don't spawn in the tree's build them appropriately. This will help add to the overall theme of the plot.

Structure. The structure of a plot are the buildings and small touches, like statues and archways that you use. Your structure, the large hourglass, needs rethinking. Perhaps change it to a large house or a watermill with a farm. I don't think that the hourglass was a good idea. Nice try though!