Tayter_Kat

CyberSenpai

Jul 19th, 2015
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  1. Hello CyberSenpai, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. I see you have a somewhat floating house on a cloud, but it is lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add slabs, fences and stairs to any build to make it have more depth. You can also add detail by incorporating trap doors and buttons on a structure as well. If you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you haw to add depth and some examples of how not to add depth to a structure.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have a tree on your plot, and it isn't bad, but it needs some love. Try adding more leaves onto it, because if you want to make the trunk smaller, you have to get rid of the house inside as well. If you want to keep the trunk the same size, add some leaves. If not, make the trunk more narrow and add a bit of leaves. This will make it more realistic.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Some of your plot is very flat. Try adding more hills/craters to your plot to give you a better chance to rank up and to add to the plot. Otherwise good here!
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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