xDraghun

DeathDino Plot Review

Jul 17th, 2015
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  1. Hello DeathDino!!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off by talking about your structure.
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  5. I love the way your structure is being used based on the theme of this build. Your water mill in the back needs some work thou. Your structure needs better detailing and better depth. its hard to add this since its so compact into everything else thou but try your best. For reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial. For your lamps at the front of the plot, instead of beacons, use glowstone. Your roof needs some work on it aswell.
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  7. For your organics, we frown upon default trees. U should always make custom tree when building organics. Also, i think your trees are too cluttered together. Space them out a little. When building custom trees, its always good to keep in mind that u have to add branches and roots for a realistic feel.
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  9. Your terrain is really nice and has had a lot of thought and effort put into it. The pond with the water flowing from the hill is really nice, and I like how you added sand as a layer for the bottom of the pond. Maybe u can add in sandstone or birch wood for variation. Also, try adding some lilypads, sugar cane, and flowers around the pond for a more detailed effect. Same for the rest of the terrain, try adding more blocks for variation and detailing such as gravel, cobblestone, clay, or any block that matches your palette.
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  11. You are so close to ranking up, but i would like you to change these small things first. Good Luck and hopefully i see you as a novice real soon! :D
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