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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain.
- The terrain you have is basically all one level. I can see where you've used W/E to smooth that first area because all the layers line up. You need to raise the terrain a lot, so it's not so flat. As well, I like where you've mixed some other block types, but the majority of it is still all grass. You can combat this with the use of 'decoration'. To decorate a plot means to add things like grass/tall grass/flowers/wheat etc.
- Having the water area is nice, however it sinking into the ground like that looks a little messy. I would have it level, and I wouldn't have the pathway sinking into the ground either - you could make a bridge? That's an added structure!
- Secondly, organics.
- I like the idea behind the tree growing from multiple areas into the middle (underground), however the way it's done needs a little help. The roots are a bit too extended, and way too 'curly'. As well, the multiple trunks you have leading to the tree look awkward, and having them all a different shape looks a bit messy. As well, the leaves are too 'pyramidy', and not bushy and big enough for the size of the trunks/roots you've built. I would suggest not going for a style like this, and instead making one big tree, or multiple trees leaning over the water.
- Look up Plutouthere on YouTube for amazing tree tutorials!
- Same has to be said for the trees on the top. The roots are far too long, and I get the theme, but the leaves are too tall, and it just looks awkward. Like I said, I get the theme, and I understand it's meant to be the dragons perch, however it just looks too forced in a way.
- I love the dragon, though. Has some good shaping to it! I would just like to see the belly of the dragon a little curvier, instead of square like it is now!
- Lastly, structure.
- You have two structures, which is a nice amount for the size they are. The one on the ground is nice - has good detailing and a nice palette, but I would like to see an improved roof. Using all stairs/slabs for a roof isn't all that creative. I would suggest something like this: https://imgur.com/a/Lr9Ab#0
- The second structure you have is a bit too basic. I like the shape, however the palette is pretty simple, and the walls lack depth/detail. You could add some detailing with stairs/slabs, just not excessively. I also wouldn't have it floating in the air - I can see it's on a small island, and that island has risen from the ground beneath it, but there's no reason behind that, so it's all a little random. I would highly suggest building it on the ground.
- OR expanding on the island a little, bit making it fit more with the plot (Give it a reason to be floating! This reason could be that it's being held up by the dragon...)
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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