Actually this term paper is very good. The background is very clear and the case studies and interview also very good. I also have some advices may help you to improve your term paper.

1.On last two paragraphs of page 3 you talk about whether the video games make the children violent. There is a case you may be able to talk about. Some video games are very realistic in nowadays. After children play for a long time, some of them may not be able to distinguish the real world and the world in game. Their character can fly in the game, but in the real world they still think they can fly, this will cause some problems.

2.On the first paragraph of page 4, you talk about why the entertainment industry cannot disappear. I think the better answer is entertainment industry can make a lot of revenue every year, it means they will pay a lot of tax. The government is actually the beneficiary, so they will not allow the industry disappears. Furthermore, the entertainment industry provides a lot of jobs to the society, if this industry disappears, there will have so many people lose their jobs and this will make the society more unstable. This is against the goal of let the entertainment industry disappears.

3.On the second paragraph of page 4, I think video games may responsible for the case of Devin Moore because the video games can teach players how to crime in some level. The players may be aggressive but they do not have the idea how to crime, but the video can bring how to crime in their mind because the game is too realistic. The player will think the stuff they do in the game can be done in real life.