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  1. from /hhg/ Helluva Hotel General #909, #910
  2. part 1: https://pastebin.com/9qYjm4ds
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  4. Pentagram
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  6. Spidey's Head
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  8. >Story starts off as Spider-Man swinging through Pentagram City contemplating on hell itself
  9. >"Man! Who knew that hell was such a big place. Didn't even know that there are 7 rings instead of nine. Guess Dante was wrong."
  10. >Spider-Man swings through Pentagram City contemplating the implications of Jehova killing every pagan God.
  11. >"So much for asking a deity like Odin for help on decoding Stolas' book. I wonder who else got eliminated by God? Still, I shouldn't give up on trying a way to escape from hell. Can't even believe I saved Norman Osborn in the first place! I've got to stop monologuing. I'm just glad that I'm somewhat secure in hell as paradoxical as that may seem."
  12. >"Good thing that imp actually gave me a job! All I see are prostitutes and drug dealers all over the city.... That and the fact that no sinner can permanently be killed, I can stop holding myself back from killing people. Just have to avoid the use of angel weaponry, and they'll get right back up again. This is Hell, and this means that there's no sense in showing mercy."
  13. >Spider-Man sees a sinner overdosing on coke, but chooses not to help. He only helps those who are too weak to defend themselves.
  14. >"....There are no consequences or responsibility for these kinds of people. No redemption that I can think of. There's not even any police or some sort of force aside from overlords keeping the peace each on their own territory."
  15. >Spider-Man lands on top of a building, looking as black and red as any other construction.
  16. >"Guess this hell operates on "Hell is other people", they couldn't be more right. And the overpopulation control just makes things worse than they already are...."
  17. >"I wonder, if I was as lost as they are, would I end up a monster? Father Ben always told me, despite knowing my true nature, that any kind of monster can become a saint. Am I worthy enough to take on that title even though I'm not human?"
  18. >Help! I'm shot!
  19. >"That's an answer for another day!"
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  21. idk man
  22. Maybe I've missed out on past greens of him but I feel a bit lost reading this like about Odin and Norman Osborn.
  23. But overall, I just think it's boring. I don't really care about this Spidey's monologue even though I do like Spiderman. Not a writer at all but I think you're trying to cram way too many visuals and explanations in this one little monologue.
  24. >>He only helps those who are too weak to defend themselves.
  25. How about showing how he came to this rather than just blankly stating it? Like why? How did he come to this? What's his reasoning?
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  27. Anyway, I think it picked up around Spider man landing on top of the building. But this seems to already generate little interest, so I doubt you'll get much engagement going forward.
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  29. This post is about the abilities that my Spider-Man, has.
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  31. Nemean-Lion Skin
  32. Spiderman is immune to all weaponry that is created by man kind and yes, that includes nukes and sci fi weaponry. He is not, however, immune to weaponry created by divinity. So Angelic weaponry does harm him. Heracles bested the Nemean Lion and his son should be as tough. Fate wills it.
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  34. Probability Manipulation
  35. Due to being the son of Heracles, Spiderman has the luck of the fates on his side. So any impossible problems that Spidey gets into, he's fated to either survive or suffer minimal damage as possible. His father was needed to destroy the Gigantomachy, Spidey is needed to save lives.
  36. Costume Manipulation
  37. Due to being the son of Arachne, Spidey has the ability to manipulate any clothing that can be crafted by human hands. This also includes sci fi clothing. He can not craft magical clothing.
  38. Herculean Strength
  39. Spider-Man has the strength of Heracles on his side. However, due to being raised among mortals, he limits himself and only uses his god like strength when he needs to.
  40. Zeus's Lightning
  41. Due to being a grandson of Zeus, he takes reduced damage towards lightning attacks. He can eventually manipulate and absorb lightning , but it requires intense training and he needs to be electrocuted to the point where he catches fire.
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