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salamence's Novice Review

Jul 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, I'd like to say I really like the concept of this plot. It's totally original!
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  5. Terrain looks great! You have a nice palette and a good variation of layers in it - you haven't kept anything flat and it looks really nice! You've also decorated it nicely with grass and flowers!
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  7. Secondly, organics. Your tree with the jungle leaves is a really nice looking pine style tree. However the one with the spruce leaves is a bit too chunky. If you want to keep that one, I suggest adding some roots, and also changing up the leaves and making them a bit more spotted, like the jungle leaf tree.
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  9. Lastly, structure. All your structures are original, but they're not extremely detailed. The two that are passable as they are, would be the station building and the train. However the boat and the large stone building are waaay too simple in design.
  10. Everything lacks depth, and the two structures I highlighted second lack a nice amount of depth and detail (especially the stone one). The station could also use a little more detailing on the pillars and the walls, however the design is nice.
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  12. Good luck!
  13. - Dutty :3
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