Tayter_Kat

Agracraggle

Jun 27th, 2015
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  1. Hello Agracraggle. I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You don't have any structures, and you need one to rank to a Novice. Make sure the structure has depth. Depth is the layers within a build/wall that created by trap doors, fences, buttons, slabs, and stairs.
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  6. Organics:
  7. This is anything living, like trees and grass. You have none of this either, so make custom (hand-made) trees and add them all around your plot. Make sure the trunk and leaved go together well and that they don't look stubby or like a swig. Also, the branches should not be stiff and the leaves should not be boxy. It should be more like the branches are lively and the leaves flow well with the tree.
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  9. Terrain:
  10. This is the ground, like cliffs and hills. Once again you have none of this, so add it all around the plot. Make sure the terrain is very smooth and doesn't look like a creeper blew up your plot.
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  12. Overall, I would just start over, because your plot does not have anything needed for you to rank up, I am sorry to put it bluntly:/
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  14. God Luck<333
  15. -Tayter_Kat
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