Hey [[*user JanitorialStaff]]: while we can relate to adhd making it a pain to read large blocks of text, commenting merely to point it out is uh unnecessary; we generally expect replies in the Critique forums (both here in the Ideas Critique one, and in the Drafts Critique forum) to provide in-depth critique to users; and this is not hugely useful on it's own.

Please don't do this again.