Rin/Ayako fic rev 2

Outline:

Some kind of intro
Rin gets to school early and has tea with Ayako in the archery dojo. Sakura is also there, practicing her archery. Ayako gets up to help Sakura, and touches Sakura’s arm and back while adjusting her posture. Rin gets intensely jealous of how Ayako is touching Sakura. She begins to blush, and Ayako asks her if the tea is too hot.
Rin wants to spend some time with Ayako, so she invites her over to study for an upcoming exam.
Rin's back seizes up, and she falls into Ayako's chest. Ayako offers to give Rin a massage, and she princess carries her up to Rin's bedroom
They undress each other

To do:
Rewrite undressing scene to focus on Rin’s legs and hair and Ayako’s stomach and arms
Change to Rin has back pain, Ayako gives her a massage and that leads to shenanigans


The smell of strong tea tickled Rin’s nose as Ayako set the cups on the table. The sharp twang of an arrow being fired rang through the dojo, a sound that Rin found soothing. Sakura was in early again for extra practice. Diligence was certainly one of the underclassman's virtues. Rin sipped her tea as she watched as her sister's arrow flew straight and true, burying itself into the target.

“Why don't you just join the archery club already? You already spend more time here than most of our members,” Ayako said with a sigh, as she took a swig of tea.

“I'd rather not have to deal with Shinji every morning. It would be a shame to stain this nice hardwood floor with his blood,” Rin said. She watched Sakura nock another arrow.

“Somehow, I don't think you're entirely kidding,” Ayako said. The arrow hit the ground with a solid thud, promoting the vice-captain to sigh. “That girl has a bad habit of always moving her foot forward after every shot until her posture is all messed up. Sorry, give me a second.” The floorboards creaked as Ayako stood up and walked over to her clubmate. Sakura bowed and apologized to her vice-captain, who gently put her hand on the small of Sakura's back to straighten her posture. Next, Ayako slid her leg under Sakura's skirt to show her proper foot placement. Ayako's chest was pressed up against Sakura's back, as the taller girl looked over her trainee's shoulder. Ayako's cheek was nearly touching Sakura's face, close enough that a lock of brown hair fell onto the shorter girl's lips. Rin figured that Sakura could surely smell Ayako's shampoo, and her face flushed as she suddenly felt intensely jealous of her sister. While Rin was no stranger to roughhousing with her best friend, she had never experienced the kind of closeness that the two club members were currently sharing. She imagined herself lying in bed, Ayako's hand running across her stomach, fingers exploring more sensitive regions. She subconsciously slid her hand between her thighs. Rin was so entranced by the warm feeling below the pit of her stomach that she failed to notice that Ayako had returned to the table.

“Hey, was the tea too hot? Your face is all red,” Ayako said, her voice tinged with worry.

“Ah, no, it's fine, I was just thinking of… those upcoming exams! Don't you think they're going to be brutal?”

“Sure, but when have you ever had trouble with a test, Ms. Perfect Honor Student?” Ayako said with a grin, flashing her fang-like teeth.

“I-It’s not like I'm worried about my own grades, or anything! I just thought you might need some help, that's all!” Rin said, happy that she able to quickly find an excuse to spend time with her best friend. The fluttering in her heart only increased with the thought of being alone with Ayako.

“Sure, sure. As if you've suddenly taken interest in my scholastic performance.”

“Well, it wouldn't do it my rival had to take summer classes. I'd leave you behind in a heartbeat, and what's the value of life without good competition?” Rin said haughtily, tossing a twintail over her shoulder. She avoided looking at her best friend's face, in order to not increase her arousal level. She looked around the dojo in hopes of clearing her mind. She watched Sakura struggle to do a push-up, and the sight of her sister's large breasts squashed against the floor only added fuel to the fire that was raging between Rin's legs.

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“Well, that about does it for Classic Japanese Lit. Why am I even bothering to quiz you, Ms. Perfect Honor Student? You're 100 for 100 today,” Ayako said with a sigh, as she closed the textbook. The overstuffed couch squeaked as the brown-haired girl stood up and bent over to shove the book into her bag. Rin noticed how shapely her friend's rear looked in her jeans. Ayako was not what Rin would consider a classic Japanese beauty; her best friend stood more on the handsome side of the scale with her short hair, strong jaw and piercing gaze. While most visitors came to the archery dojo to gawk at Sakura, the polite and beautiful underclassman, Ayako herself had no shortage of admirers. Plus, she could give almost anyone a run for their money in a fight, either verbal or physical. Even Rin’s sharp tongue could barely hold its own in a battle of wits against the vice-captain of the archery club.

“Now that the hard work is out of the way, why don't we have some tea and snacks? I just got a specialty brand,” Rin said. Ayako raised a questioning eyebrow, either in suspicion of her friend's idea of “specialty” or the suggestion that the honor student ever considered school work to be difficult. Either way, she signaled her assent with a shrug.

“Sure, but how weird is it? It's not made from the leaves of a thousand-year-old tree, is it?” Ayako said, putting her hands in the pocket of her pink hoodie.

“It's something that will warm you up, for sure. Just wait here,” Rin said, feeling the blood rush to her legs as she stood up. The drafty mansion seemed especially chilly today as she walked through the living room towards the stairs.

The stairs creaked under her feet as she ascended. If her magical barriers didn't alert her to intruders, the floorboards certainly would. She made her way down the foreboding hallway towards her father's room. She still felt the same sense of unease that afflicts every child upon crossing the threshold of their parent's bedroom, despite the years that have passed since her father's death. Still, she kept her father's room just the way he left it that fateful day, only entering the hallowed space to clean the accumulated dust. The sunset threw blood-red light onto Tokiomi’s writing desk, where a small glass jar stood in a shaft of the sun's dying light. Rin found the jar of tea leaves when she decoded her father's will. At first, she had thought it a cruel joke, until she read the accompanying note explaining that the ancient leaves were made from the leaves of the tree under which Buddha had achieved enlightenment. Imbibing it would certainly boost her magical reserves. Perhaps the deceased magus had intended it as a gift for when Rin got married. But Rin, knowing that she could easily meet the same fate as her father in the Holy Grail War, didn't want to wait for a far-off celebration in order to enjoy her father's gift. Truth be told, she only used studying as an excuse to share it with Ayako. After all, her grades were at the top of the class, and the archery vice-captain shot straight on exams, as well.

Rin bowed her head in thanks to her dearly departed dad as she grabbed the jar and strode out of the room. She stopped by the kitchen and grabbed the tea set. As she returned to the living room, she saw Ayako sprawled out on the couch, looking bored. The girl's shirt slipped up, exposing the athlete’s taut tummy and navel. A thin white stripe peeked out over the top of Ayako’s jeans, marking the border of her most intimate canyon. Rin’s pulse quickened as she imagined herself sliding her fingers under her best friend's waistband, feeling the smooth skin underneath…

Ayako stretched out like a cat, bringing Rin out of her daydream. She set the tea things on the table, next to the jar of tea leaves, an ornate glass container which wouldn't look out of place in an alchemist's lab. Which, Rin reasoned, is pretty much exactly where she found it.

Ayako eyed the jar suspiciously. “Hmm, that looks properly baroque.”

Rin scoffed. “Father had rather refined tastes. I found this while cleaning his room the other day.”

“Are you sure we should be drinking this? I’m no expert, but it looks awful expensive… and old. Are you sure you don’t want to save it for a special occasion?”

“Are you implying that the pleasure of my company is not special enough?” Rin teased. She tried to pop the cork off the jar, but the stubborn stopper simply wouldn’t budge. Perhaps her father had sealed it with a magical spell? Her face turned red with effort as jammed the jar between her thighs and strained against the unmoving cork. She even briefly considered using a magic spell to unseat it, so as to not look weak in front of her rival.

“You look like Sakura trying to do a push-up. Here, give it here,” Ayako said, stretching out her hand. Rin, not normally one to accept help, grunted as she handed over the jar. “It’s probably so old that it’s sealed shut. You shouldn’t bother,” the proud magus said, crossing her arms. Ayako simply put the jar under her arm and pulled on the cork, which smoothly popped free.

“Well, I'll go put the kettle on,” Rin said with a sigh, standing up. After her first step, she felt a searing pain race up her spine. Perhaps she had overdone it while jumping across rooftops with her servant the other night. After all, even a magically-enhanced human body isn't made to handle jumping fifty stories to the ground. Her muscles immediately seized up. The world spun as her legs gave way, forcing Rin to stretch her arms out for balance as she toppled forward.

“Whoa, easy now!” Ayako said, reaching out to catch her fallen friend. Rin’s right hand gripped the ornate back of the couch, but the fingers of her left hand closed around something soft and warm. Her face collided with Ayako's shoulder; soft, brown stands tickled her forehead as her nose buried itself at the base of her friend's neck. As she pulled her legs onto the couch, she looked down and saw that her hand was enclosed around her best friend's breast. Both girls stared silently at the groping fist. Ayako's cheeks turned a deep crimson, a color that Rin knew wasn't solely from the heat coming to life. Rin looked up into her friend's face, so close that their noses were almost touching. Ayako met her gaze, and Rin saw herself reflected in the deep pools of her friend's chocolate-colored irises. Rin grimaced in pain, causing Ayako to wrap her arm around her shoulders for support.

“Hey, are you alright? Did you tweak your back?” Ayako said.

“Ah, I think so. It's seized up, for sure. What, what are you doing?!” Rin let out an uncharacteristic yelp as Ayako slid her other arm under Rin's knees and lifted her into the air.

“Why, your knight in shining armor will carry you to your bedroom for a massage!”

“Wait, I can walk by myself!” A fresh burst of pain laid bare Rin's lie. “More importantly, where did you learn how to give a massage?” she asked, while Ayako carried her up the stairs.

“In health class last week. Oh wait, weren't you Makidera’s partner for the demonstration that day?”

“Yeah, and her nails were so long that they kept digging into me. I'm sure I have scars now.” Rin rested her head against Ayako's shoulder, feeling the soft material of the hoodie under her ear. Although she was glad that she could finally enjoy such a close moment with her friend, Rin wished it wasn't under such painful circumstances.

Ayako gently carried Rin up the stairs. Rin was so comfortable that she almost forgot about the tight corner leading to her bedroom until her head whacked against it.

“Oww! Be careful, you gorilla!” Rin said, as stars danced across her vision.

“Sorry! Here, let me kiss it and make it better.” Ayako gently lifted Rin up and planted a kiss on the top of her friend's head. Rin was over the moon at the feather-light touch of Ayako's lips on her skin, but she couldn't make it seem like her rival had gotten one over on her.

“That didn't do squat! Your massage better be damn good, or else!” Rin said, feeling the heat rush to her face as she put on her best pouty face while crossing her arms.

“I assure you, it'll be an experience you'll never forget.” Ayako gently lowered Rin onto her overstuffed bed. Rin sat up and tried to lift her shirt over her head, but the pain was insurmountable.

“Let me. Just keep your arms up,” Ayako said. Rin did as she was told, and soon she felt the cool air on her bare skin. She was surprised that she felt comfortable enough in front of Ayako that she didn't instinctively cover her chest.

“Ahh, they're tiny!” Leave it to Ayako to completely ruin the mood. Although, Rin did feel that Sakura must've received the boob gene.

“You jerk! I thought you were going to give me a massage, not sit there and make fun of me!”

“Yeah, yeah. You're such a spoiled princess. Lay on your stomach.”

Rin rested her head against the pillow and closed her eyes. Ayako unhooked Rin's bra, exposing her entire backside. She felt Ayako's warm fingers begin to push her muscles away from her spine. Her touch was firm, yet Rin could feel the tension begin to melt away. Ayako next began to knead the muscles, pushing the pain away. Her calloused fingers added a rough sensation that was not unpleasant. Soon, Ayako had worked her way down to Rin's butt. The familiar warm feeling returned between Rin's thighs, indicating that she wanted Ayako's fingers to continue further down.

“There, how does that feel?” Ayako said. To her amazement, Rin was completely pain-free. In fact, her head was swimming in such pleasure that it took her a second to realize that she had just sat up without putting her bra back on. The article of underwear lay on the bed as Rin inadvertently flashed her best friend. Rin stretched out her arms, feeling a newfound limberness in her back. She only realized that something was amiss when she looked over and saw that Ayako was staring at her chest.

“My eyes are up here, jerk,” Rin said, before beaning her friend in the face with a pillow.

“I'm sorry, I-wahh!” Ayako was caught off guard when Rin grabbed her sides and wrestled her rival onto the bed.

“Let's see what yours look like!” Rin said, as she tore off Ayako's hoodie. Her prey tried to escape, but Rin would not be deterred. Ayako's shirt came flying off next. Rin took her friend in a wrestling move to keep her still, before slipping a practiced hand up Ayako's back and unclasping her bra. The undergarment sailed in a lazy arc across the room, coming to rest on Rin's lamp.

Upon seeing her best friend's breasts in the flesh for the first time, Rin could only mutter an astonished, “Wow.” They were round and perfectly shaped, topped by the cutest pink nipple. The air suddenly seemed charged with electricity.

“Listen. I have a confession to make,” Rin said. “I haven't actually been looking for a boyfriend. The thing is, whenever I imagine myself with someone… you're always the person that I'm with. Even when I have… intimate dreams, you're always the one by my side.” Rin laughed softly, amazed that the perfect honor student was spilling her guts in such an embarrassing way. “The truth is, I don't want to be with anyone but you.”

“Rin, I-”

Rin placed a finger on her friend's lips, quieting her. “Please, just let me have this small victory today,” she said, moving her hand onto Ayako's cheek. At this close range, the athlete's chiseled features became softer. Even without makeup, Ayako's beauty was enough to take Rin's breath away. Rin closed her eyes and kissed her best friend on the lips. The rush of adrenaline she felt was better than any she felt after a successful magical experiment. Rin's heart skipped a beat as she found Ayako to be a more than willing partner, kissing her back with equal passion. Calloused fingers ran across Rin's stomach and worked their way up her midsection, as Ayako gripped her friend's breasts. The two schoolgirls’ lips separated, a thin trail of saliva shimmering in midair.

“Heh, this is payback for earlier,” Ayako said, moving her hands around in a circular pattern on Rin's modest chest. The young magus had never been touched this way by anyone before, but somehow it felt so… right. Rin retaliated by placing her hands on Ayako's toned stomach, before slipping her fingers under the waistband of her friend's jeans, just as she fantasized earlier. However, just as her fingertips felt the soft material of Ayako's panties, her forward momentum was halted by the confluence of skin and denim. She would have to get those blasted jeans off before she would be able to test her best friend's sweet nectar.

“Do you… want to go further?” Rin said. She was so drunk on lust that she could barely choke out the words. Ayako nodded, and grabbed her hand to calm the nerves of both girls. Rin could feel the warm sweat on her friend's palm, and found it adorable that even the fearless Ayako could get nervous in such a situation.

“Here, let me,” Rin said. She unbuttoned Ayako's jeans and slid the zipper downward, exposing the girl's panties. She then hooked her thumbs into the panties on either side of Ayako's hips and slowly slid them down, her own underwear growing wetter with each centimeter. A patch of brown hair soon revealed itself, followed by the smooth pink lips of Ayako's sex. Rin had to resist the urge to bury her face in her friend's snatch. Returning to the task at hand, she moved the panties down the archer's toned legs and set them aside on the floor. All that remained to be conquered were Ayako's socks. Rin removed the fluffy footwear, letting Ayako happily spread her toes. Finally, Ayako lay naked as a jaybird on her best friend's bed.

Rin suddenly felt acutely aware of her own clothing. Ayako was one step ahead, however. “You had your fun. Now it's my turn,” she whispered into Rin's ear. Ayako unzipped her skirt and let it fall to the floor.

“You know, I've always been jealous of how good your legs look in pantyhose,” Ayako said, kneeling down and rubbing her cheek against Rin's inner thigh.

“H-Hey, stop it. You'll put runs in them!” Rin said, pushing Ayako away. The aggressive girl simply grinned and began to pull off Rin's pantyhose. The magus yelped in surprise and fell onto the bed, inadvertently making Ayako's job easier. She pulled them off Rin's feet and gave them a deep smell before jumping on top of Rin on the bed. Ayako's breasts hung directly in front of Rin's face. Rin counterattacked by suckling her friend's nipple, causing Ayako to moan. Rin noted that Ayako's discipline under fire was formidable indeed, likely due to her strict athletic training regimen. But as she was thinking such thoughts, Ayako got Rin to disengage her lips by tweaking the honor student's own nipples. Once free, Ayako deftly removed Rin's panties and tossed them aside.