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- Hello ImJustDoge, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Novice plot...
- Structure:
- This is anything from houses to castles to towers. Your houses are good, but it doesn't have any depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth to a structure by incorporating stairs, fences, and slabs. You can also add trap doors and buttons as some detail. IF you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This gives you bad examples of depth, and how to add depth properly. Make sure it is not the exact same, BE CREATIVE and make your own design.
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is fine, but you have a few flat spots on your plot. Make sure you fix these areas and you will be fine here.
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your trees are fine, but they aren't anything special. I recommend making the tree bigger, adding branched and roots, and finally add the correct amount of leaves. This will make the tree seem more real.
- Other:
- This is anything I cannot fit into the previous three categories. One thing the buildings do not have is a pallet. Pallet is the blocks you choose to build that fit a theme. The structures you built has different blocked within it. I recommend using the same type of blocks to build every structure.
- Good Luck<3
- -Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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