Tayter_Kat

ImJustDoge

Aug 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hello ImJustDoge, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Novice plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to castles to towers. Your houses are good, but it doesn't have any depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth to a structure by incorporating stairs, fences, and slabs. You can also add trap doors and buttons as some detail. IF you need a visual example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This gives you bad examples of depth, and how to add depth properly. Make sure it is not the exact same, BE CREATIVE and make your own design.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is fine, but you have a few flat spots on your plot. Make sure you fix these areas and you will be fine here.
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your trees are fine, but they aren't anything special. I recommend making the tree bigger, adding branched and roots, and finally add the correct amount of leaves. This will make the tree seem more real.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything I cannot fit into the previous three categories. One thing the buildings do not have is a pallet. Pallet is the blocks you choose to build that fit a theme. The structures you built has different blocked within it. I recommend using the same type of blocks to build every structure.
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  12. Good Luck<3
  13. -Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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