OKAY. T9.

We gonna do this k?

So..
First things first. Change the lava to water. I know this is going to give the plot a much different feel, but it will hopefully open it up a little bit. It'll mean you can also add more grass, more leaves - custom flowers, leaves on the trees etc. It'll add so much more colour to the plot and will make it so much nicer to look at. I think it'll give you a really high chance of ranking if you make the plot more 'pretty' than dark.

Secondly, the dragon on top - it's not to the standards of an organic build to rank as it is. The shaping is all a bit too square, and the colours are pretty depressing. I think it's best to remove the top area of the drago and the eggs, and instead turn it into a grassy patch, with blossomed trees, a water area with some reeds, wheat, flowers etc. This just gives you so much more detail to work with on the plot.

Thirdly, the palette, like I said last night, needs to change more drastically. Now that you're going to be converting it into a watery, mythical type of place, kind of like I initially said, you're going to want less red colours in the terrain. I'm thinking something like stone, stonebrick, andesite, cobble etc. Something along those lines. Then we can overlay with grass and make it all pretty! We'll probably take out the obsidian too, if we want it pretty. Maybe we can change it to crystals, with the use of stained glass.

The hidden house on the right of the build needs to go. That's the house that's been causing a lot of problems and it's alaways getting changed, but it's not improving. I really want you, at this point, to look super closely at the roofs above your plot, at the detailing Julie used on the house at the entrance. Copy them block for block if you must. I put a gold block above the ones I mean.

I really hope this opens up your plot.
I have to be straight with you now. Because this plot is good but seems to not be going anywhere fast, there's potential that not listening will result in a force clear.

- Dutty