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  1. He came in abrupt[ly].
  2.  
  3. “[A]re you the saint of miracle ?”
  4.  
  5. People usually [come here to get their wounds cured], but this person had [cut in line].
  6.  
  7. “… I have no intention call myself a saint, but some people calling me [that] on their own[.]”
  8.  
  9. People like this guy [removed were] usually get beaten up quickly[;] but today, [no one made a move; in fact no one was even complaining].
  10.  
  11. Rather, everyone in the town [was] willing [stand aside].
  12.  
  13. [The] strange person was accompanied by two people, an armor[ed] knight that seemed to be strong and a black[-haired lady [had] a sword on her waist.
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  15. At first, I thought that [it was] the intimidation of the companions [that caused people to stand aside], but it seems to be different.
  16.  
  17. “It’s a lord … “
  18. “Hey, the lord is coming[.]”
  19. “Who is it that unleashed that stallion?” [This sentence doesn’t really make sense. I’m not sure what is meant here?]
  20. “Mommy[,] look, there is a lord”
  21. “Do not look, you can get pregnant!!” (Don’t ask me just read for yourself, I don’t want spoiler)
  22.  
  23. Ah, I understand who you are from [what the townspeople are whispering].
  24.  
  25. I certainly appreciate [that] Xeno [Zeno?] [had already told me] about a womaniz[ing] lord, but it seems to be [evident from] the reaction of the town people.
  26. [The strange lord looked at me from head to toe]. [It was hot today, so I was not wearing my hood], so [my face is visible].
  27. After he finished [examining] me, the lord begin to talk.
  28.  
  29. “It’s [replace with “You are” unless the author used “it” on purpose ] so beautiful…”
  30. “Ha, thanks. Uhm … Erotic Mushroom-san” (Ero kinoko-san)
  31. “Who is the Erotic Mushroom !?”
  32.  
  33. He had a hairstyle like a mushroom, [so] I called him the reasonable-sounding name of [“]Erotic Mushroom[“]. [Even though] my line of sight was [obscured], [I could tell that] I was [being] stared at.
  34.  
  35. “… [Maybe Mushroom Erotic is better]?”
  36. “[Are you not just changing the words around!?] ”
  37. ...
  38.  
  39. Oh, yeah. Since this pattern was kind of familiar, let mix in something else later. [not sure what this means]
  40.  
  41. Apart from that, the other party is very angry for some reason.
  42.  
  43. Kicking the armor of the blown out armor helmet and threatening the inhabitants who burst out laughing is a lot of stupidity. [Who is kicking the armor and threatening, it is hard to tell from this sentence]
  44.  
  45. Only the knight and [I] are not laughing at him, the woman who is waiting by his side awkward say. (he is some kind of comic relief character)
  46.  
  47. “You do not have to get so angry … Why [not tell her your name] if you don’t want [her] to call you [remove like] that?”
  48. “Is this [terrible situation] my fault!? I am the owner of this town, my name is Samaka Swaro ! [I have] been appointed to the mainland of Arlesha by the king!”
  49.  
  50. [His statement was worded as a question, but from his actions, I felt embarrassment rather than disgust. The armored knight and the lady who had her hand on her sword made sure that there was no possibility of escape.] [why was the knight mentioned if only the lady had her sword ready?]
  51.  
  52. [The sketchy [is that what you meant by skeptic?] Samaka began to lean closer, trying to accentuate his face, which was his most attractive feature. Suddenly he stopped and took a step back. It seemed that he was concerned with the smell of his breath even though it had smelled fresh and refreshing like a herb. After checking his breath, he steps forward with a Kabe don (?).]
  53.  
  54. [“I apologize for keeping you waiting”]
  55. [He pressed one hand to the wall and held my chin in the other; attacking me with] a special combo technique [used] to get a girl.
  56.  
  57. … What [should] I do, my heart [doesn’t] skip a beat. [Maybe reword this to just say the special combo was not very effective…]
  58.  
  59. [While I do understand what he is trying to do, the appeal of his technique depends on his execution and the taste of the girl in question. It would certainly be pleasant if it came from someone you liked.]
  60.  
  61. To be honest, Samaka-san’s face is not so bad. At least it is not [so] bad [as] to [be] call[ed] ugly.
  62.  
  63. Sorry, it is a sense. [? not sure what is meant by this]
  64.  
  65. The hairstyle which consolidated black hair in tickiness[?] is [like] glossy mushroom no matter how you [look] at it[.] [The] addition [of a] hat with [many] expensive feathers cover[s] a lot [of his face, makes] the area of the face [seem] strangely small. His hair or hat looks like the main body.
  66.  
  67. [His] clothing [can be considered to be] a light armor, but the decoration[,] which seems useless here[,] [remove “and there”] is attached to the rose gorge[?]. [The} whole balance [of his outfit] is bad. [Moreover], why is the breast open firmly for some reason, [how would you even defend his fashion sense]?
  68.  
  69. [Overall], I think that he is “awesome handsome man but also a person that you feel awkward to be with” type.
  70.  
  71.  
  72. [Hearing the fuss, Ferunoto-san flew out of the house.] [Not sure what is meant by poking the boobs up…?]
  73. Ferunoto-san seemed to [misunderstand] when she saw Samaka-san, who is kabedon-ing me to the wall of her house, She glare[d] at Samaka with obviously angry eyes,
  74.  
  75. “Samaka … what are you doing to that child?”
  76. “Ferunoto-dono, no … wait , I just propose[d] [a] marriage with her.” ( “-dono” is same with “-sama”, use for a person you respect a lot)
  77. “You are still [not satisfied] with thirty-four [wives]?”
  78. “Thirty six [remove people] now”
  79. “It’s still bad !!”
  80.  
  81. Somehow, they are acquaintance[d with each other]. [However,] Ferunoto-san[‘s] [remove talking] [hostile tone does not contain a hint of friendliness.].
  82.  
  83. … There are thirty six wives, it is an outrageous harem.
  84.  
  85. [Although I was not angry about it,] I think he [has] quite a lot wives right now. There is [the] possibility [that he is forcing them to be with him], but it is rude to think about it without hear [the full story from the man] himself.
  86. Samaka-san did not seem to be frightened, [by] Ferunoto-san[‘s] glare, shrugg[ing] his shoulders sharply[? sharply doesn’t make sense here].
  87.  
  88. “Fuu … Ferunoto-dono, what are you doing in such a place?
  89. “… Because I’ve blinded, I’ve already retired, [haven’t you heard]?”
  90. “I have heard that your eyes have healed. I even heard that after receiving that report, the king personally ask[ed] you [to return] … [Is that correct], the former Kingdom Order Third Corps Vice-Leader? “
  91. “… “
  92.  
  93. I was surprised that Ferunoto-san was [remove a ]from the Order [and had such a prestigious] occupation.
  94. I am convinced that she always seem busy if you were so great.[Not sure what is meant by this sentence] Perhaps [s]he was [in hiding in order] to refuse the order from the king.
  95. Looking at [her] attitude now, I [realized] that [s]he is not enthusiastic about returning. On top of that, [s]he [is probably also feeling] guilty about refusing the [request] from the king.
  96.  
  97. However, this situation is somewhat bad. Ferunoto-san is now clearly rolling in. [rolling in? maybe you mean angered or frustrated?]
  98. She is a serious person. She won’t give up until the opponent give[s] up. [This type of personality is] not suited for quarreling.
  99. On the other hand, Samaka-san is [remove clearly] talking calmly[, obviously possessing the upper-hand in the conversation.].
  100. The words that he told Ferunoto-san is also moderate, so that I can take it as if he won’t acept a refutation. [accept a refutation? unsure what is meant here]
  101. Zeno said that port town Arlesha is [an important center of trade for] this country. [Samaka-san must be competent if the king was willing to entrust him with such an important role].
  102. Even though he has [a] bad sense (of fashion) and [is a womanizer] (pervert), [Samaka-san would not have been appointed by the the king to such [an] important [position] unless [he was familiar with] politics and economy.
  103. Battle system and political system. [Two people with completely different expertise are fighting right now and the current fight is clearly in Samaka-san’s favor]
  104. What are you going to do [when fighting] your opponent’s field of expertise? She really is a serious person.
  105.  
  106. … What should I do?
  107.  
  108. If you focus on your sense of smell, it is the woman who is close to Ferunoto-san and Samaka-san [that has a] “strong” feel [compared to the others]. I can understand by the blood reading from the smell of blood.
  109. Ferunoto-san is my friend, I can’t run away without her.
  110. However, it’s still annoying [even] if I [could] run away with her. The opponent is the lord of this town, and Ferunoto-san may be held liable.
  111. Besides, I can’t smell Samaka-san[‘s] blood, so [I] can not distinguish his ability.
  112. From his body, it smells quite sweet. Perhaps it’s perfume, but its odor is too strong to [distinguish] the smell of blood. Do not overdo it.
  113. I [could] read [it] if [my] skill level is high[er], but unfortunately the smell enhancement [skill is] only [at] level 1.
  114. I can not grasp the degree of surprises beyond the ability to understand, so it may be dangerous to move inadvertently.
  115.  
  116. “…For the time being, we can not talk properly [here.] [H]ow about have some tea ?”
  117. “That’s good, Let’s go to my residence, Argento. We can have a talk.”
  118. “Ah, Arge!”
  119. “I’m OK, Ferunoto-san, I [will] just have [remove a] some tea.”
  120.  
  121. There is no doubt that it will not be easy to keep [maintain peace here], so let’s [take advantage of] the invitation of the opponent [remove here].
  122. It is much better than [talking] for a long time [b]ecause it is troublesome. If [anything], I want to finish early and take a nap.
  123.  
  124. “…Even if he [gave] me three meal[s a day and a place] nap, I think I will not eas[ily] fall.”
  125. “… [Then, w]hy not deny [him] with an immediate answer here?”
  126.  
  127. No, if you do it really it will be quite fluctuating. [What is meant by fluctuating here?]
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