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- Aspirant Review:
- Nice plot so far but theres a couple of things you gotta work on before you rank:
- The trees are quite nice, so i'll leave them alone for now xD but the structure is very flat and has little to no detail. Add some more layers to create depth and use stairs and slabs to add detail to the build.
- The organics are nice, but they need some work done. They seem a tad boxy right now, so try and smooth them out and really take ideas from irl animals. How they look and how theyre shaped.
- If theres going to be a water source, i would make it a bit bigger as well. The tiny singular pool looks out of place at the moment so try and incorporate some more somewhere x3
- Also try and add more levels of terrain to the lower layer of the plot :D
- I know this is a lot to throw at you, but take your time and really go ham :D
- Good luck!!
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