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Super Jenny MLAATR AU

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  1. shortly before she would have started on the XJ project, Nora has a one night stand and ends up pregnant, faced with the prospect of raising a child by herself, she swallows her pride and asks her sister Wisteria to come help her, as a result of her pregnancy she abandons the XJ project and gives birth to a daughter that she names Jenny, a couple years down the line Nora and Wisteria team up to work on a super soldier formula for Skyway Patrol(as they're offering a large sum of money for one that works), after a lot of hard work they succeed in their goal, but then in a series of comedic mishaps a young Jenny ends up drinking a large quantity of the formula(like the amount needed for it to work would be about maybe 10 ml, and she drank like several large cups worth) and thus gains super powers at an immense scale(and as she gets older an appropriately snu-snu physique as well), Jenny spends the next couple of years being trained to control her new powers, but eventually convinces Nora that she needs to socialize with people and starts going to High School, and quickly becomes the center of attention for many reasons(not the least of which being that she's 7'4" and weighs about 500 pounds of mostly muscle, and yet despite all that is one of the prettiest girls in the school)
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  3. one thing I was thinking is that unlike canon, Jenny in this universe successfully becomes friends with Brit & Tiff, also that her and Sheldon's relationship is more mutual in nature than the mostly one-sided form it has in canon
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  7. That's quite the fascinating concept. Would human Jenny closely resemble her exo-skin disguise?
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  10. yeah pretty much
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  13. What's the point of her being that fucking massive?
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  16. a lot of it is that I felt that if she's human in this AU she should have something unusual about her to replace the issues being a robot her canon self has, and since the idea was that she'd have the standard "Brick" set of super powers, it felt logical to have her have a visibly superhuman physique
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  18. Also the exact numbers aren't important, those can be changed as long as she's still noticeably larger than anyone else among her peers
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  21. Ok, cool.
  22. My take on it would be that while she was trained to control her powers involuntary stuff causes her to clumsily destroy things or make a mockery of herself.
  23. >first day at school
  24. >wants to make friends
  25. >tries talking to someone
  26. >going well enough
  27. >need to sneeze
  28. >tries to desperately find an out without being rude because she's gone through this.
  29. >shenanigans prevent escape
  30. >sneeze blows the clothes off of potential friend or knocks them through a wall
  31. >potential friend hates her and whole school is laughing
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  35. there'd definitely be stuff like this, and actually you solved an issue I had with this idea, since the plan is to have the Krust's be Jenny's best friends here, and Sheldon be more prominent as a love interest for Jenny, it left me wondering what to do with Brad, and that bit you wrote gave me the idea, because of something like that, Brad ends up as Jenny's primary antagonist in her civilian life
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  39. Hey really like this cool idea, hope you don't mind I Drew art for it
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  43. very nice, hadn't thought of it originally, but I like the idea of Jenny being a "special agent" of sorts for the Skyway Patrol
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  46. How about her hanging with Brit and Tiff trying on some outfits they've suggested
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  49. >casual super strength amazon Jenny
  50. OH NO AAAAAA I'M GOOOOING
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  53. That brings up another question I have. Would Brit and Tiff serve as Jenny's best friends more so than Brad and Tuck?
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  56. Yup as I suggested earlier the Krust Cousins end up being Jenny's best friends, while Brad ends up being an enemy
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  59. What would super soldier Jenny's default outfit look like?
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  62. was thinking it'd be something similar to the exo-skin's outfit from the show, so >>101984838 isn't too far off, although I'm thinking she'd be wearing a belt, the shoes would probably be closer to boots(and be heeled), and be wearing more in the way of jewelry
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  64. of course since she's BFF's with the Krust's in this AU, she'd have a variety of additional outfits as well
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  66. as for when she's on duty as a "Special Agent" of the Skyway Patrol, >>102023681 is pretty much on the money
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  69. This raises an interesting question, would Jenny still find herself rejected by society if she were a superpowered human?
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  72. Probably not, she'd likely be deified like Captain America.
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  75. It wouldn't be completely gone, as she's still going to be socially naive(as she would have been home schooled for most of her life), not to mention she's still noticeably different from normal people
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  77. So while she's more popular than her canon counterpart, she still has some enemies at school as well as friends(albeit both categories have different lineups than canon)
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  80. I take it this means no XJs 1 through 8 or Armagedroid either?
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  83. I don’t understand the setting they have very well but some previous iteration sisters could be cute
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  85. Or horrifying
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  87. Either way
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  90. Amazonian builds seems to be a recurring trend for the youngest Wakemen daughters
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  93. Not sure how it affects Armageddroid, but the idea is that shortly before starting the XJ project, Nora has a one night stand and gets pregnant as a result, this leads to her abandoning the XJ project and settling her issues with her sister Wisteria, Jenny gets her powers when she's somewhere between five and eight by accidentally drinking a very large quantity of a Super Soldier formula that her mom and aunt are working on for the Skyway Patrol(which is why she's wearing their uniform in the pic I posted earlier)
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  95. So Jenny is an only child here
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  98. Does this mean that Jenny wasn't isolated from contact with other people and thus, not socially clueless about human society in this alternate reality?
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  101. I said before that Jenny is an only child in this AU, although thinking on it more I might try to find a way to fit in human versions of XJ's 1-8, maybe as the result of an enemy trying to clone her perhaps?
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  104. >Does this mean that Jenny wasn't isolated from contact with other people and thus, not socially clueless about human society in this alternate reality?
  105. depends on what you mean in that regard, in some respects she has more, as among other things her aunt Wisteria has been part of her life for the entirety of it, and after she ingested the formula that gave her the powers she has, she's been in regular contact with people from the Skyway Patrol, since said formula was intended for them, which eventually leads to them requesting for her to become a "Special Agent" of theirs(as mentioned before it's why she's wearing one of their uniforms in >>102041725*) about a year prior to her convincing Nora to send her to public school
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  107. so she's not quite as clueless as canon Jenny, but she's still pretty sheltered and naive
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  110. I genuinely find this SuperJen concept to be as fascinating as the original series' would you mind going into some more detail about what other similarities this Jenny has from her robotic counterpart?
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  113. overall I'd say this Jenny is fairly close to canon Jenny in personality, though since one of the more important divergences here is who Jenny is friends with(here she's BFF's with the Krust's), and who she's enemies with(Brad), that probably has an impact on her personality*
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  115. *as is having her aunt Wisteria as a presence her entire life, I kinda figure Jenny has some slightly more "Hippy" leanings in certain areas compared to canon
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  118. Describe the Krusts relationship with Jenny for us. Were they initially envious of her due to her powers drawing popularity away from them? Do they legitimately enjoy her company and join her on missions? If so, do they contribute in any effective ways?
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  121. >Describe the Krusts relationship with Jenny for us.
  122. they're her best friends, and overall the relationship can be described as her developing socially by being friends with them, while the Krust's become better people over time by being her friends
  123. >Were they initially envious of her due to her powers drawing popularity away from them?
  124. pretty much(well that and the fact that despite being super tall and buff, due to the fact that she has an incredibly pretty face, and amazing curves, Jenny quickly got the attention of every straight guy in the school), however not long after Jenny arrived at the school she ends up saving Brit & Tiff's lives in a very public manner, so in a combination of sincere gratitude and pragmatic thinking(after all having a friend with super powers could be useful), they decide to be friends with Jenny instead of becoming her enemies, and it doesn't take all that long before the friendship becomes an earnest one on their part
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  126. around the same time Jenny accidentally humiliates Brad in a very public manner, leading him to hate Jenny and become her primary antagonist at school
  127. >Do they legitimately enjoy her company
  128. yes, helps that they share much of the same interests
  129. >and join her on missions? If so, do they contribute in any effective ways?
  130. at first it's much like how Brad & Tuck get involved in canon, over time I figure them to be more helpful though
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  133. Is Sheldon still Jenny's biggest admirer here? If not, who would be the closest thing to a love interest she would have?
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  136. yes, in fact in this idea Sheldon's feelings for Jenny are much more mutual in nature on her part
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  138. the Krust's initially aren't too fond of the idea as Sheldon is after all a huge nerd, but then get the idea to give him a makeover(something in the vein of attached pic) and coach him to help him fit in better as part of their group
  139. https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/co/image/1501/83/1501830299408.jpg
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  142. So do you happen to have a fetish for sharply dressed people?
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  145. not necessarily, I just think it's a good look for Sheldon, plus the contrast of him looking like that yet still acting much like canon Sheldon is one that I really like(it's similar to the contrast that made me originally think up this idea regarding Jenny)
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  148. http://img.booru.org/the-collection//images/72/fd7bfaa2588df1a75642cb16fa1f25cf325572cf.png
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  151. >I kinda figure Jenny has some slightly more "Hippy" leanings in certain areas compared to canon
  152. Crossing my fingers casual nudity is one of those traits this Jenny exhibits. Preferably when by herself or with other girls she's close with in her presence since it's nothing they haven't seen before.
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  155. >Crossing my fingers casual nudity is one of those traits this Jenny exhibits. Preferably when by herself or with other girls she's close with in her presence since it's nothing they haven't seen before.
  156. might be, not sure yet, for one thing I'm not certain how directly lewd I want this idea to go
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  158. also there'd be a neat contrast between some of the "Hippy" habits she's picked up from Wisteria, and some of the Law & Order habits she's picked up since she started being an agent for the Skyway Patrol(and a similar one between the practical scientist habits she learned from Nora, vs the less practical fashonista habits she's starting to pick up from the Krust's)
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  161. The lewdest I could see this going is innocuous nudity that could translate into humor.
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  164. Aside from superhuman strength, what other powers does SuperJen possess?
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  167. >The lewdest I could see this going is innocuous nudity that could translate into humor.
  168. well I meant in general, not just about the casual nudity
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  170. >Aside from superhuman strength, what other powers does SuperJen possess?
  171. the usual array of enhanced durability, speed, and senses, not sure if I want her to be able to fly, and I was thinking that maybe she has some sort of energy projection ability as well
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  173. also thinking she'd have at least one ability that everyone agrees is just plain weird, not sure what though
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  176. That's what I meant as well. I can't really picture Jenny's friendship with the Krusts getting too "hands-on" if you catch my drift.
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  179. you're probably right, but the temptation is definitely there
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  182. Who would even make the first move in a hypothetical platonic to romantic relationship?
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  185. >Super Jen
  186. I dig this idea way more than I should. I guess I'm just a sucker for big, powerful women with sweet personalities.
  187. I think the idea of her being friends with the Krusts and Brad not liking her is a bit more interesting than what the show offered. The Krusts are manipulative mean girls, and even if they grow out of it, that's still an interesting angle to explore. Brad initially trying to humiliate Jenny and "expose her" as the thug and bully he perceives her as and slowly growing to see her as the hero she is is another good storyline. I can see Tuck as a starry-eyed hero worshipper utterly obsessed with Super Hero Jenny. Sheldon would likely be relatively unchanged except he'd be gaga over a superhuman and not a robot lady.
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  190. yeah you hit the nail on the head overall, including how I was thinking on how to use Tuck but never got around to mentioning in the /co/ threads, also that Jenny's feelings about Sheldon are more mutual then her canon counterpart
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  193. The idea trades robots for superhumans. Instead of Jenny being a misfit due to being mechanical, she's a misfit because she's a girl who happens to be over seven feet tall and can bench press a dump truck.
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  196. I'm on board with this "Super Jen" idea, too.
  197. What are her powers? The default brick set (super strength, super speed, super durability) are obvious, but what about the more out there powers like eye beams and flight?
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  200. the for sure thing is indeed the Brick set, currently I'm thinking she can't fly, just Jump Good, and yeah I'm thinking she has some sort of energy projection abilities
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  203. so that pic actually ties into one of the ideas that got brought up but hadn't been fleshed out yet, Jenny in this AU is originally an only child, but I didn't want to just throw out her sisters, so the idea became that this world's version of the other XJ units is that they're the result of one of Jenny's villains trying to clone her with mixed results(not to mention that once they actually meet Jenny they quickly decide to turn on their creator and go with her)
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  205. design wise I'm thinking Brokenlynx's designs are pretty close to what I have in mind, although XJ's 3 through 7 would be a bit beefier, and we'd need designs for XJ's 1 & 2 as well
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  208. I'm down with all of that.
  209. >she can't fly, just Jump Good
  210. I like that. Makes her have to work a bit harder, which is compelling.
  211. >I'm thinking she has some sort of energy projection abilities
  212. Maybe her body stores energy like a living atomic battery and her energy projection is essentially a weaponized venting system.
  213. >XJ sisters are clones
  214. Perfect. Though instead of the villain route, you could also say that they're attempts by Nora/Skyway Patrol to mass produce supers like Jenny.
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  217. >Maybe her body stores energy like a living atomic battery and her energy projection is essentially a weaponized venting system.
  218. not a bad idea
  219. >Perfect. Though instead of the villain route, you could also say that they're attempts by Nora/Skyway Patrol to mass produce supers like Jenny.
  220. kinda feels shady even for Nora, and while Skyway Patrol could be jerks at times in canon that feels a bit much for them, also not all that necessary as the Super Soldier Formula Jenny ingested to gain her powers was successfully mass produced, albeit used in much smaller doses than what Jenny took(she drank like a liter when the intended dose is like a tablespoon of it), so Skyway Patrol has plenty of Super Soldiers, just that most of them are on the Captain America level rather than what Jenny's at
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  222. hence why I'm going with it being one of her villains who does it
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  225. >Maybe her body stores energy like a living atomic battery and her energy projection is essentially a weaponized venting system.
  226. >Jenny has had a slow week, and her body is practically glowing with pent with up energy.
  227. >In fact, she might actually be luminescent with stored power.
  228. >Mid-class session, she asks to be excused so she can "freshen up."
  229. >She's excused with a hell pass, and heads to the girls' room.
  230. >A moment later, it's like someone fired a wave motion gun out of the girls' bathroom window.
  231. >Jenny walks back to class with a spring in her step, fresh as a daisy.
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  234. love that, would be extra hilarious if we saw that burst fly off into space and hit a couple of Cluster ships inadvertently
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