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- Wish's BHA4 Judging - Unworldly Manifestations
- -=Zino's Entry=-
- Rubric:
- -20 points per pattern - 10 points to creativity and pattern aesthetics, 10 points to fun factor and pattern design.
- -30 points towards general aesthetics, sound, and polish. (For the record, *average* aesthetics is essentially the defaults per engine, and is at around a 6/10 per category)
- -(Usual contest-specific bonuses will be omitted due to contest theme being OCs lol)
- At the end, the total points will be divided by the total possible points, and then multiplied by <contest average> to get your final score.
- Nonspell 1: 13/20
- Basic, pretty enough, fun to dodge, passable. Wish it had more variety.
- 6.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6.5/10 - Fun/Design
- Pagoda Art -S.H.O.U.- Tundra Tornado PH: 8.5/20
- Speeeeeen. It looks pretty enough but it's boring.
- 6.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 2/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 2: 13.5/20
- Similar critiques to nonspell 1, but better looks. Still wish it had more variety
- 7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6.5/10 - Fun/Design
- Conversation Sign -F.A.E.B.- Ice Breaker: 14.5/20
- Simple concept, neat indicators, keeps me moving around, pretty nice. Just wish it had more impact with sfx.
- 7.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 7/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 3: 14/20
- You know what, it technically looks more basic compared to Non 2, but I like this a million times more
- It's clean, the big-ass micro squares have impact, it's more fun to dodge, yes.
- 6.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 7.5/10 - Fun/Design
- Cry of the Trapped Bird - SnowGrave -F.A.T.A.L.-: 19/20
- Obvious reference, RIP Berdly.
- Memeing aside, this spell is actually pretty cool. It keeps me moving and looks beautiful, gets really intense towards the end.
- One of the most memorable spells in the competition, unironically.
- 10/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 9/10 - Fun/Design
- Nonspell 4: 12/20
- Wait there's stuff after this? Uh
- A more boring version of nonspell 3, but otherwise fine. Nothing particularly bad about it.
- 6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design
- Thrill Wheel -R.I.T.A. S.P.- Graze 500,621 bullets to win!: 8/20
- What the hell am I looking at.
- I mean the attack is fine and it's a fascinating clear condition but...it feels weird. I don't really like it lmao
- 5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design
- AESTHETIC: 21/30
- Looks: Solid looking script visually, besides fighting Nueball. 8/10
- Sound: I actually had a weird music bug happening when deathbombing during judging, wtf. -1 for that
- Otherwise lol Sentence of Death never dies and sfx are fine. 6/10
- Polish: Why did you make your fursona's tail swish and why did that take so much of your time. 7/10
- SUM OF PATTERNS: 102.5/160
- AESTHETIC: 21/30
- TOTAL: 123.5/190 * 25 = 16.25/25
- Frankly I can't tell how much of this script was a shitpost and how much of it was serious...it was certainly interesting, but not my favorite of yours lol.
- Nice work having an insanely memorable (and faithful) SnowGrave tribute, though, it was honestly the standout moment.
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