05.diff

diff --git a/episode1/scenarios/05_Bay_of_Tirigaz.cfg b/episode1/scenarios/05_Bay_of_Tirigaz.cfg
index 7b1a734..fc9b351 100644
--- a/episode1/scenarios/05_Bay_of_Tirigaz.cfg
+++ b/episode1/scenarios/05_Bay_of_Tirigaz.cfg
@@ -588,6 +588,8 @@ NE: Arthol"
             variable=galas_store
             kill=yes
         [/store_unit]
+
+        {LOCK_VIEW}
     [/event]

     [event]
@@ -596,24 +598,36 @@ NE: Arthol"
         [message]
             speaker=Ishkaal
             # po: The pointy-eared demons here are the elves.
-            message= _ "You filthy soft-skinned beasts, this is your last opportunity to give us back our swamps! They’ve always been ours, and we are not planning to retreat to the forests of the pointy-eared demons!"
+            message= _ "You filthy soft-skinned beasts, this is your last opportunity to return our swamps! We are not planning to retreat to the forests of the pointy-eared demons!"
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Tan-Vatar
-            message= _ "We care little about your stupid conflicts on the eastern borders. You broke our treaty by trespassing our frontiers, and now you ask from us the very lands you just stole by force. After raiding the southern fortress, no less! Do you really believe we are going to be lenient about this matter now?"
+            message= _ "We care nothing for your stupid conflicts on the eastern borders. You trespassed our frontiers and broke our treaty, and now you ask from us the very lands you took by force; after raiding our southern garrison, no less! If you believe we will accede now—"
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Ishkaal
-            message= _ "To the Dark Gods with you and your treaty! The words of an orc are as meaningful as the stench of your breath! Maybe you’ll admit your defeat once we take down your precious town in the north. Go ahead, Rishix! Give them a lesson!"
+            message= _ "To the Dark Gods with you and your treaty! The words of an orc are no more meaningful than their fetid breath! Maybe you’ll admit your defeat once we take down your precious town in the north. Go ahead, Rishix! Give them a lesson!"
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Rishix
-            message= _ "Ha, ha! We’ll tear these puny dirt-dwellers to pieces!"
+            message= _ "We’ll tear these puny dirt-dwellers to pieces!"
         [/message]

+        [delay]
+            time=250
+        [/delay]
+
+        [scroll_to]
+            x,y=40,28
+        [/scroll_to]
+
+        [delay]
+            time=250
+        [/delay]
+
         [move_unit_fake]
             x="40,$galas_store.x"
             y="28,$galas_store.y"
@@ -650,6 +664,10 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [redraw][/redraw]

+        [delay]
+            time=500
+        [/delay]
+
         [message]
             speaker=Galas
             message= _ "That city to the northwest... is it the port of Tirigaz?"
@@ -657,14 +675,19 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Elynia
-            message= _ "Yes... although it wasn’t so well fortified during my time. Time has changed many things indeed."
+            message= _ "Yes... it wasn’t so well fortified during my time. So many things have changed since then."
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Galas
-            message= _ "Is that smoke I— Wait, I hear some steps..."
+            # po: "Is that smoke I smell?"
+            message= _ "Is that smoke I— Wait, I hear steps..."
         [/message]

+        [delay]
+            time=250
+        [/delay]
+
         [move_unit_fake]
             side=1
             type=Orcish Crossbowman
@@ -686,6 +709,10 @@ NE: Arthol"
             [/modifications]
         [/unit]

+        [delay]
+            time=750
+        [/delay]
+
         [message]
             speaker=Vuruk
             message= _ "Hello, strangers! Are you loyal to the Grand Council?"
@@ -703,7 +730,7 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Vuruk
-            message= _ "Those vile saurians hold the port of Tirigaz under siege, and I am currently unable to reach the city to deliver some important news to our lord. I think I speak for all of us when I say that your help would be very valuable. I need to get to the city keep, but the journey across isn’t safe while those vermin roam about our lands!"
+            message= _ "Those vile saurians hold the port of Tirigaz under siege, leaving me unable to reach the city to deliver some important news to our lord. I think I speak for all of us when I say that your help would be very appreciated. I need to get to the city keep, but the journey across isn’t safe while those vermin roam about our lands!"
         [/message]

         [message]
@@ -713,22 +740,20 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Mal Keshar
-            message= _ "(<i>whispering</i>) Although I am curious about the saurians’ motives... Don’t you think your trust in the orcs could be misplaced?"
+            message= _ "(<i>whispering</i>) I am curious about the saurians’ motives... Don’t you think your trust in the orcs could be misplaced?"
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Elynia
-            message= _ "We must stop and repel those saurians before they take over Tirigaz or any of the northern villages providing resources to the port."
+            message= _ "We must stop and repel those saurians before they take over Tirigaz or the northern town that provides resources to the port."
         [/message]

-        [message]
-            speaker=Galas
-            message= _ "Let’s prepare for battle again, then."
-        [/message]
+        {UNLOCK_VIEW}
     [/event]

     [event]
         name=turn 2
+
         [message]
             speaker=Galas
             message= _ "Vuruk, what is it that you need to report to the lord of Tirigaz?"
@@ -736,18 +761,20 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Vuruk
-            message= _ "Hmm... It’s something I’m not allowed to share with anyone but Lord Tan-Vatar and his trusted commanders."
+            message= _ "Hmm... I fear it is nothing I’m allowed to share with anyone but Lord Tan-Vatar and his trusted commanders, at least not at this time."
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Galas
-            message= _ "Very well, then."
+            message= _ "Fair enough."
         [/message]
     [/event]

     [event]
         name=turn 3

+        {LOCK_VIEW}
+
         #
         # Mandatory generic sea creatures' appearance.
         # No campaign is ever complete without this.
@@ -758,6 +785,10 @@ NE: Arthol"
             message= _ "Come in aid of your kin, friends from the deep sea!"
         [/message]

+        [scroll_to]
+            x,y=2,16
+        [/scroll_to]
+
         [unit]
             animate=yes
             side,x,y=5,2,16
@@ -795,20 +826,16 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [redraw][/redraw]

-        [scroll_to]
-            x,y=2,16
-        [/scroll_to]
-
-        [redraw][/redraw]
-
         [delay]
-            time=250
+            time=500
         [/delay]

         [message]
             speaker=Mal Keshar
             message= _ "Ah, ha, ha, hah! They have the support of some wild creatures from the ocean! Nothing we cannot handle."
         [/message]
+
+        {UNLOCK_VIEW}
     [/event]

     [event]
@@ -852,7 +879,7 @@ NE: Arthol"
                     [or]
                         side=4
                     [/or]
-                    message= _ "Where did all these damned fiends come from?"
+                    message= _ "Where did all these damned creatures come from?"
                 [/message]
             [/then]
         [/if]
@@ -860,6 +887,7 @@ NE: Arthol"

     [event]
         name=turn 6
+
         [message]
             speaker=Ishkaal
             message= _ "This is turning out to be harder than it was supposed to be."
@@ -925,7 +953,7 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Vuruk
-            message= _ "Arthol has been taken over by the saurians! Now there’s no hope for Tirigaz!"
+            message= _ "Arthol is being ransacked by the saurians! Now there’s no hope for Tirigaz!"
         [/message]

         {ENDLEVEL_DEFEAT}
@@ -1238,17 +1266,17 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Tan-Vatar
-            message= _ "I see you helped Vuruk return from his mission. Well done! So, what can we do for you to repay our debt?"
+            message= _ "I see you helped Vuruk return home safe and sound. Well done! So, what can we do for you to repay our debt?"
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Mal Keshar
-            message= _ "Um, we are currently looking for transportation services. We must sail through the open ocean to find a certain island..."
+            message= _ "Um, we are currently looking for transportation services. We must sail the open ocean to find a certain island..."
         [/message]

         [message]
             speaker=Tan-Vatar
-            message= _ "I mean no offense, but only fools would dare sail through the <i>open ocean</i>! Nobody has ventured into farther waters and returned in one piece, ever! Nobody knows exactly what kind of creatures inhabit the Vast Sea! Nobody knows for certain what lies beyond the horizon, but it surely can’t be good, you see! Why would anyone want to travel so far into unknown waters, when there are plenty of safer unexplored lands awaiting back whence you came?"
+            message= _ "I mean no offense, but only fools would dare sail the <i>open ocean</i>! Nobody has ventured into farther waters and returned in one piece, ever! Nobody knows exactly what kind of creatures inhabit the Vast Sea! Nobody knows for certain what lies beyond the horizon, but it surely can’t be good, you see! Why would anyone want to travel so far into unknown waters, when there are plenty of safer unexplored lands awaiting back whence you came?"
         [/message]

         [message]
@@ -1258,7 +1286,7 @@ NE: Arthol"

         [message]
             speaker=Elynia
-            message= _ "We know the location of a certain isle where some elves who once inhabited the Great Continent went to. We need to gather some information from them — as part of a mission for the Grand Council."
+            message= _ "We know the location of a certain isle where some people who once lived in the Great Continent went to. We need to gather some information from them — as part of a mission for the Grand Council."
         [/message]

         [message]