Tayter_Kat

Moosegoosmoo644

Aug 15th, 2015
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  1. Hello moosegoosmoo644, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some structures but you are missing depth hat is needed to rank up. Depth is the layers within a structure/building. You can add depth by adding slabs, trap doors, stairs, buttons, and fences. If you need an example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you how to do depth and some bad examples of depth.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain is somewhat flat so I recommend adding more interesting. terrain to your plot. Add some craters, hills, cliffs, etc. to you plot to do this!
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have a tree on your plot, but I recommend adding more branches to it to make it more realistic. They can be anywhere on your tree. Also, the leaves do not have to be just attached to just the branches. Lastly, make the trunk lees cylinder since a trunk Is not a perfect shape.
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  10. Fix the thing mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
  12. P.S. sorry about giving you the wrong review!
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