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- Hello segami_!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I dont have much to write since you plot is really guud but needs a few adjustments. Lets get started.
- Your structure looks good but the design on the walls is a little too repetitive. Try to experiment more with different designs. It's lacking depth. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial.
- Your tree is nice and custom but you could shrink the trunk a little. Also add some more cuz u have some extra spots where you could put trees.
- Your terrain is pretty nice and smooth. I like how you added the leaves draping over the hills. The gravel is also a nice touch when surronding the river.
- I think your are so close to ranking. What's ticking me off is the repetitive walls and the lack of trees/design. Work on that and for sure youll get promoted. Good Luck! :D
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