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- olivinearc - Today at 3:19 PM
- ok, lemme crack open arc doc
- "Each segment features a Catherine section and Another Person’s section. This is since her perspective will be fairly limited to a lot of the events going down, but also because there’s no way she’d realize some certain character’s plights, even though they ultimately all relate back to her not ascending yet.
- "
- (Lysandre, Gavin, Augustine/Zelda, Godfrey, Dawn, Morty, another generic girl, the kimono girls)
- are the potential segments listed out
- potentially also steven+deoxys
- NeonBlack - Today at 3:21 PM
- " another generic girl" trainer I assume?
- olivinearc - Today at 3:22 PM
- more like a control group for the control group themselves
- not necessarily another trainer but could be one of palmer's candidates, yeah
- Catherine arrives in Saffron and meets up with Silver, where they go to Viridian to try and find Green since they assume Red is with him. Catherine is instead told that Red’s hiding up at Mount Silver, and Green’s their best shot at navigating it safely, on the condition Red gave him being that Catherine beats the gym leaders. While they can be won unofficially, she needs the badges and it’s an excuse for her to train up her mons for the Elite Four. The other gym leaders comply under Red and Lance’s orders, while she is assumed AWOL in Johto. The world slowly ends.
- Catherine arrives in Saffron and meets up with Silver, where it’s determined that she can either just stay hidden in the city, or stay hidden while she wanders around and they work together to train her team together. Since she wants to talk to her brother, but also check in on her father’s side of the family, they first go to Viridian (instead of Celadon) to try and find Green while on the way to Pallet, since they’re already going out of the way. They try to meet up with Green, who essentially kicks them off into a wild goose chase as they go around and travel and train. Eventually they meet up with him at Cinnabar, and he takes them proper to Mt. Silver.
- Catherine arrives in Pallet Town and stays the night with her aunt. She travels up to Viridian and speaks with Green, who sends her on a wild goose chase that she wanted to go on anyway and train while she looks for her brother.
- Catherine finds out Red is up on Mt. Silver and that Green is the best means of finding him when he does go up there. Green tells them to not even bother until she can beat him in a match (which they both know she can’t) and sends her off to go do some training, she takes that as her cue to wander around as to not go stir crazy.
- Catherine arrives in Pallet Town via Tohjo Falls, and
- is what i had in the drafts
- Lt. Surge, Erika, Green, and Sabrina are the gym leaders i see easiest to have a scene with cath
- blaine and such would be a harder sell but cinnabar is something, brock i wanted to make part of the distant family to clay which is tempting but mm, koga's generic, misty i like but also i'm not getting any ideas
- NeonBlack - Today at 3:27 PM
- notmisty you mean
- olivinearc - Today at 3:27 PM
- yeah
- i see it being waterblaise tbh
- gingers blz
- i mean, i could make mini conflicts like train heist and stuff but its ultimately so not important to the main plot
- NeonBlack - Today at 3:30 PM
- hm, could maybe work if the miniconflicts are self contained in each chapter
- make the arc a bit of an episodic one
- olivinearc - Today at 3:31 PM
- i feel like that's the second step if i'm unsure how the first is handled
- it could be
- 8 chapters
- one chapter a gym leader
- i'm gonna skip the battles
- literally no reason to show the battles by that point
- NeonBlack - Today at 3:32 PM
- yeah
- maybe the final one or two blows if you wanna lead into the post-battle convo but that's it
- olivinearc - Today at 3:32 PM
- yeahhh
- i'm still considering the implications of the gym leaders basically being ordered by red to let cath battle but i also don't. know.
- well it'd be both red and green
- but still
- like there's reason she should and is willing, it's more. the gym leaders themselves
- NeonBlack - Today at 3:33 PM
- "it's for the sake of the world, guys!"
- "you mean it's not just your average nepotism?"
- "that too!"
- olivinearc - Today at 3:35 PM
- i'm gonna consider the folks
- i feel like there's untapped potential in morty
- (Lysandre, Gavin, Augustine/Zelda, Godfrey, Dawn, Morty, another girl
- lysandre - god of medicine, loves augustine who keeps dying and reincarnating every thirty years, association with xerneas (And thus close with cath but ;v)
- gavin - god of space
- augustine - god of animal (husbandry), zelda's his sister, see: lysandre. could show his perspective in things or another era while he's dying.
- godfrey - god of storms (or wind if i wanna go that route to dawn's lightning) and i mean, he has showed up in dd before so he could pop by goldenrod and stuff too, already elite 4 member. could make him more heavily from everyone dies with the sickness and stuff having it be ascension related.
- dawn - making history in her own right serving as an intern for rowan, female perspective, frey's sis
- morty - morty.png
- another girl - just as the control group as discussion goes on among the normal populace
- kimono girls - foreshadowing they have to learn the god dance
- i don't think
- well
- if kanto's 8 chapters
- they're gonna be 4k each max
- so lemme go grab the quote of the dog days
- "the Sea boiled, the Wine turned sour, Dogs grew mad, Quinto raged with anger, and all other creatures became languid; causing to man, among other diseases, burning fevers, hysterics, and phrensies".[26]
- so the sea boiling, ruined crops and other refined goods, rabid pokemon or magic coma'd mons, an outbreak of disease and madness
- 4 things right there
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