olivinearc

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Mar 22nd, 2018
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  1. olivinearc - Today at 3:19 PM
  2. ok, lemme crack open arc doc
  3. "Each segment features a Catherine section and Another Person’s section. This is since her perspective will be fairly limited to a lot of the events going down, but also because there’s no way she’d realize some certain character’s plights, even though they ultimately all relate back to her not ascending yet.
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  5. (Lysandre, Gavin, Augustine/Zelda, Godfrey, Dawn, Morty, another generic girl, the kimono girls)
  6. are the potential segments listed out
  7. potentially also steven+deoxys
  8. NeonBlack - Today at 3:21 PM
  9. " another generic girl" trainer I assume?
  10. olivinearc - Today at 3:22 PM
  11. more like a control group for the control group themselves
  12. not necessarily another trainer but could be one of palmer's candidates, yeah
  13. Catherine arrives in Saffron and meets up with Silver, where they go to Viridian to try and find Green since they assume Red is with him. Catherine is instead told that Red’s hiding up at Mount Silver, and Green’s their best shot at navigating it safely, on the condition Red gave him being that Catherine beats the gym leaders. While they can be won unofficially, she needs the badges and it’s an excuse for her to train up her mons for the Elite Four. The other gym leaders comply under Red and Lance’s orders, while she is assumed AWOL in Johto. The world slowly ends.
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  15. Catherine arrives in Saffron and meets up with Silver, where it’s determined that she can either just stay hidden in the city, or stay hidden while she wanders around and they work together to train her team together. Since she wants to talk to her brother, but also check in on her father’s side of the family, they first go to Viridian (instead of Celadon) to try and find Green while on the way to Pallet, since they’re already going out of the way. They try to meet up with Green, who essentially kicks them off into a wild goose chase as they go around and travel and train. Eventually they meet up with him at Cinnabar, and he takes them proper to Mt. Silver.
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  17. Catherine arrives in Pallet Town and stays the night with her aunt. She travels up to Viridian and speaks with Green, who sends her on a wild goose chase that she wanted to go on anyway and train while she looks for her brother.
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  20. Catherine finds out Red is up on Mt. Silver and that Green is the best means of finding him when he does go up there. Green tells them to not even bother until she can beat him in a match (which they both know she can’t) and sends her off to go do some training, she takes that as her cue to wander around as to not go stir crazy.
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  22. Catherine arrives in Pallet Town via Tohjo Falls, and
  23. is what i had in the drafts
  24. Lt. Surge, Erika, Green, and Sabrina are the gym leaders i see easiest to have a scene with cath
  25. blaine and such would be a harder sell but cinnabar is something, brock i wanted to make part of the distant family to clay which is tempting but mm, koga's generic, misty i like but also i'm not getting any ideas
  26. NeonBlack - Today at 3:27 PM
  27. notmisty you mean
  28. olivinearc - Today at 3:27 PM
  29. yeah
  30. i see it being waterblaise tbh
  31. gingers blz
  32. i mean, i could make mini conflicts like train heist and stuff but its ultimately so not important to the main plot
  33. NeonBlack - Today at 3:30 PM
  34. hm, could maybe work if the miniconflicts are self contained in each chapter
  35. make the arc a bit of an episodic one
  36. olivinearc - Today at 3:31 PM
  37. i feel like that's the second step if i'm unsure how the first is handled
  38. it could be
  39. 8 chapters
  40. one chapter a gym leader
  41. i'm gonna skip the battles
  42. literally no reason to show the battles by that point
  43. NeonBlack - Today at 3:32 PM
  44. yeah
  45. maybe the final one or two blows if you wanna lead into the post-battle convo but that's it
  46. olivinearc - Today at 3:32 PM
  47. yeahhh
  48. i'm still considering the implications of the gym leaders basically being ordered by red to let cath battle but i also don't. know.
  49. well it'd be both red and green
  50. but still
  51. like there's reason she should and is willing, it's more. the gym leaders themselves
  52. NeonBlack - Today at 3:33 PM
  53. "it's for the sake of the world, guys!"
  54. "you mean it's not just your average nepotism?"
  55. "that too!"
  56. olivinearc - Today at 3:35 PM
  57. i'm gonna consider the folks
  58. i feel like there's untapped potential in morty
  59. (Lysandre, Gavin, Augustine/Zelda, Godfrey, Dawn, Morty, another girl
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  61. lysandre - god of medicine, loves augustine who keeps dying and reincarnating every thirty years, association with xerneas (And thus close with cath but ;v)
  62. gavin - god of space
  63. augustine - god of animal (husbandry), zelda's his sister, see: lysandre. could show his perspective in things or another era while he's dying.
  64. godfrey - god of storms (or wind if i wanna go that route to dawn's lightning) and i mean, he has showed up in dd before so he could pop by goldenrod and stuff too, already elite 4 member. could make him more heavily from everyone dies with the sickness and stuff having it be ascension related.
  65. dawn - making history in her own right serving as an intern for rowan, female perspective, frey's sis
  66. morty - morty.png
  67. another girl - just as the control group as discussion goes on among the normal populace
  68. kimono girls - foreshadowing they have to learn the god dance
  69. i don't think
  70. well
  71. if kanto's 8 chapters
  72. they're gonna be 4k each max
  73. so lemme go grab the quote of the dog days
  74. "the Sea boiled, the Wine turned sour, Dogs grew mad, Quinto raged with anger, and all other creatures became languid; causing to man, among other diseases, burning fevers, hysterics, and phrensies".[26]
  75. so the sea boiling, ruined crops and other refined goods, rabid pokemon or magic coma'd mons, an outbreak of disease and madness
  76. 4 things right there
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