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- Hello ShepPlaysMc!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I wanna begin by saying that your plot needs a lot of work before ranking up. I like what u were trying to go for and the message thou. Lets start of with your structure.
- Your structures are lacking depth and detail. Try to add stairs/slabs for detailing and it adds some color depending on whcih kind you use. It would sy it would be pretty difficult adding detailing to a pyramid since irl it doesnt have much detail. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. The people look weird on your plot thou
- , but the school bus is decent. The ore blocks inside the pyramid dont look appealing.
- Your trees look like they were bonemealed which is frowned upon. Remove them and start all over with custom trees. Try to add branches and roots for a more realistic effect.
- Your terrain is pretty decent but could use some work. Try to smooth your hills some more and add another block besides red sand for color and variation.
- Your plot, i would say, needs a lot more work done for u to rank up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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