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R*Novice Review: SeanDaPimp

May 27th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. The trees on the plot are nicely done. The branches match the type of tree and the leaves arent too too crazy; though they could be tamed a bit x3
  4. The structures near the front of the plot have appropriate detailing and decent depth, but theyre made to look worn and unfinished which is unfortunate since they could be decent structures. The rest of the little huts around the plot are a bit strange and flat so try and fix those up a bit and make them a tad more detailed.
  5. The river could be more tame and less "glass pane-ey" and there's a bit of empty space here and there on the plot that i think you can work with.
  6. Its a no for now but im sure you'll get it!
  7. Good luck
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