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May 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. So firstly, you have good terrain. You have a nice amount of layers and a nice river that runs through the middle. It shows a nice amount of diversity. I would like to see the ground raised a little around the house area, just because that side is completely flat cx
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  5. Secondly, your organics. The trees are spawned in; this is an instant deny. Bonemealing saplings shows no creativity whatsoever. Please build your own trees. If you struggle, I suggest looking up Plutouthere on YouTube and watching his tutorials. Of course, there are other styles of tree tutorials elsewhere, but his are nice, common trees :)
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  7. Lastly, your structure. The roof is holding it back. I don't think the roof should be flat on top, but I wouldn't continue the stairs upwards.
  8. I think for this style of house, you should either build another level and make a roof like this: https://imgur.com/a/Lr9Ab#0
  9. Or you should make the roof like this: https://imgur.com/vo2A2Bu and make the plot have an Oriental feel, as it could easily be turned that way.
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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