Tayter_Kat

Pirringo

Aug 30th, 2015
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  1. Hello there Pirringo, This is your Initiate review….
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  3. I would like to first state that this review does not mean you’re a bad builder or that I am going to hard on you. There are just a few things that could be worked on before you rank up. Also, do not be scared by how much I write. I would just like to explain to very well so you can rank up the next time you submit<3
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  5. Structure:
  6. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a good amount of depth for an Initiate plot, so great job here!!!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This consists of anything involving the ground, like hills, cliffs, and caves. You have good terrain, but the one thing that makes to look messy is the sand under the water. I suggest making it smoother instead of rough lines. Everything else looks good. The stone islands look decent. I would just make sure your terrain is smoothed out, because right now, it looks a bit rough.
  9. Organics:
  10. This is anything living, like animals and trees. *** Your goal is to make sure you have no easy, spawned trees mad out of bonemeal. Your trees are indeed custom, so another good job here!!!
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  12. Fix the things mentioned above and your good do go!!!!! Good Luck<3
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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