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- Hello MathMan1234!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I don't have much to say about your plot but a few touches b4 u can rank up. Lets get started.
- For your structure, Try to make the roof hang over the sides of the frame instead of it just stopping by the frame. Also try to add more detail to your structure. You got the depth part dowm thou. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. If you cant tp, ask for a higher rank of staff to tp u there.
- Your trees are really nice especially since they're custom made. Try to add branches and roots to them thou.
- Your terrain has some pretty nice variation with all the blocks and your hills/mountains are nice as well. Its weird how some aspects of your terrain have more block variation than other aspects which make it look weird. The leaves on the floor add some detailing. Also, make the bottom of your river sand/sandstone and add some sugar cane/flowers around your river for a more realistic and detailed effect.
- Your so close to ranking, but not just yet. Good Luck and I hope I see you as a novice real soon! :D
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