Hey there :3

Firstly, terrain. There are some flat areas on the plot; it would be nice if you raised a couple more areas like you already have.
I think also I can see you have built the trees yourself, but they are too similar to Notch trees. Please be more creative with the shaping of the trees! If you need some help, search Plutouthere on YouTube and watch his small tree tutorials :3
The structure is perfect for an Initiate plot!

Good luck!
- Dutty :3