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- Novice Review:
- Interesting plot so far but theres a few things to work on before you rank up.
- As Ko said, i like the idea of the mixed dirt to create your own theme, but the other aspects of the plot arent quite ready for a rank. A lot of the structure looks like its floating and doesnt make much sense, so try to make it make more sense as an actual building. There also should be more structure on the plot. Weather it be towers, houses, castles whatever, there just gotta be some more :) Make sure theres proper layers in it and appropriate detailing by using slabs stairs fences or what have you :3
- There needs to be more levels in the terrain also. So far theres the chasm in the middle and the two hills on the sides. Try to make more layers by raising some bits up or adding some mountains or something :)
- The trees need to be a bit bigger and fluff the leaves so i cant see any w-e spheres :)
- Good luck with your plot!
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