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- Page 1
- Panel 1
- The scene is of a busy city street, moderate traffic but everything is normal. There are sidewalks, small trees planted for decoration. More brick and mortar than a concrete jungle.
- Panel 2
- JackHammer, our hero dressed in yellow sports armor comes running out of an alleyway carrying a civvie in his arms bridal style.
- Panel 3
- JH swings to the side, dodging a giant spiked boulder rolling out of the alley, stopped by colliding with a parked truck.
- Panel 4
- A large man stands up from the impact shaking his head, revealing that he is the boulder. He's dressed in a metal spiked vest and spiked pants. They are lose enough to show some skin.
- Panel 5
- Roller Blade has turned his head and he looks pissed.
- Info card:
- "Roller Blade"
- "His power is to make himself fat, then turn his skin to stone! He used to call himself Rock'N'Roll, but after one too many fat jokes he decided to start carrying around all sorts of bladed weapons, so he's now... Roller Blade!"
- Page 2
- Panel 1
- Jack is running away with the civvie in hand, floating in the air being pulled alongside him as RB rolls after them shouting "Get back here!"
- JH: "You know that never works, right?"
- Panel 2
- Jack sees a fire escape up above him and swings his arm holding the civvie.
- "OK, up you go!"
- Panel 3
- The civvie has been tossed all the way up to the fire escape stair case and lands gently. Just motion lines to indicate where he started and where he lands.
- Panel 4
- RB has stopped to look up to where the civvie is now. He's mad. He's also covered in junk from the road like papers, gum, other nasty stuff stuck to him or stuck on his blades. JH is more in the background.
- JH: "Why are you going ballistic?"
- RB: "That guy called me a stinkin' thrash blob."
- Panel 5
- RB is curled up doing another Sonic speed charge up
- RB: "AND THAT MAKES ME..."
- Panel 6
- RB smashes to the ground where JH was standing, our hero narrowly avoiding the impact which leaves a crater in the street.
- RB: "MAD!"
- JH: "Is that really worth tearing up the road over?"
- Page 3
- Panel 1
- RB is standing in the crater, surrounded by dust looking menacing while Jack in the foreground looking confused.
- RB: "All my life, people have mocked my weight."
- JH: "Couldn't you just work off the fat? People respect that."
- RB: "My power IS to get fat! And to turn that fat to stone and back!"
- JH: "Oh, I’m sorry bud."
- Panel 2
- RB explodes with anger, spinning in the hole kicking up dust and debris. It's a big panel in the middle of the page
- RB: "Did you just called me blob?! Somebody called me blob again?! You're f#####g dead!"
- Panel 3
- RB is charging towards JH who is holding up his sledge hammer. RB is hell bent on steamrolling our hero. The perspective is from behind JH, it's like he's between the readers and RB.
- JH: "I hope this works!"
- Panel 4
- JH's hammer makes contact with the rolling mass of stone, blades and garbage. Sparks fly. He didn't swing the hammer, he's just holding it up letting RB roll into it.
- Page 4
- Panel 1
- Pan out of the impact of RB rolling into JH's hammer. The street under JH has two lines gouged into it showing where he started and where he is now. It should have a bunch of big impact lines.
- Panel 2
- RB has sunk into the ground, his momentum is gone. There's smoke all around from the friction of the impact with the hammer and the road below.
- RB: "Wha-... WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME?!"
- JH: "You really should just roll over and surrender now. But I can't leave you here, we're blocking traffic."
- Panel 3
- Close up of Jack from the shoulders up. He's cringing.
- JH (thinking): "Man, I hope the cops show up soon."
- RB (off panel, shouting): "You son of a bitch! I'll flatten you for this!"
- Panel 4
- Jack is standing on the sidewalk holding a string with RB floating above him like a balloon. There's a kid standing next to him.
- RB: "You're dead, kid! After I roll my way out of jail I'll be coming for you! I'm your new #1 enemy!"
- JH (thinking): "I don't want someone this lame as my arch-enemy..."
- Kid: "Gee mister, that's one ugly balloon."
- JH: "Heh, yeah."
- Page 5
- Panel 1:
- Establishing shot of the college campus, the front is crowded with stalls, booths, and people all around. There's a big job fair happening today.
- Panel 2:
- In the background I2Eye’s staff are sitting in front of a table while there’s a long line of students, those at the front appear to be filling out papers. On the side some of his staff are handing out pamphlets and talking to people passing by.
- Emerging from the building all of this is set up in front of, I2Eye is standing on the steps looking over the crowd, pleased with the turn out and thinking “That all went well.”
- Panel 3:
- I2Eye spots Jack from afar. He sees a dust trail in the distance, he has a hand up over his eyes for shade. "Now what have we here?"
- Panel 4:
- A wide panning panel showing Jack dodging people and also talking to them. There are multiple Jacks in this panel to show movement.
- -Jack leaps over a table being carried by two students
- Jack: "Excuse me guys, passing through!" (He says this as he leaps over the table)
- "Damn Jack, you should consider joining us over at track and field!"
- -Jack narrowly avoids a professor, pivoting around him with a quick spin
- Jack: "Sorry Professor, I'm running a bit late!"
- You'd better be on time for our class later Mr. Kennedy!
- -Jack passes by three students, one on a step ladder, another supporting it, and one watching on the side. Jack catches a tool about to drop on the head of the student holding the ladder and soft tosses it to the one watching.
- Jack: "Hey guys you dropped this!"
- "Nice catch, Jack! Thanks!"
- Panel 5:
- Jack passes by I2Eye (Jack's already out of the frame). I2Eye is standing back as if he dodged a bullet.
- Jack (off panel): "Sorry, excuse me!"
- I2Eye: "Wow! I need to meet him."
- Page 6
- **Note panels 1-3 have similar angles and framing, ideally 3 panels should occupy the width of the page
- Panel 1:
- Jack is running as fast he can, thinking to himself “Crap, crap, crap!”
- Panel 2:
- Jack is still running, looking forward, suddenly besides him is I2Eye who has somehow not only caught up, but is now running in pace with him, looking at him and smiling while holding out a pamphlet.
- I2Eye: "Hello young man, might you be interested in some extra-curricular credit?"
- Jack looks briefly at i2eye
- Panel 3:
- Jack looks back to the front, leaving I2Eye lagging behind with a bemused expression looking ahead at Jack.
- Panel 4:
- I2eye catches up with Jack again with a smug look on his face. Jack is still ignoring him, he's hyper focused on running. I2Eye has a hand on his forehead with the palm facing out and wave pulses coming out of it.
- I2Eye: "Might I have a word?"
- Jack: "I’m running late man!"
- Panel 5:
- The camera angle is now in front of I2Eye and Jack in a worm’s eye view. Jack is running closer to the “camera” while I2Eye is nearly tripping himself in surprise.
- Panel 6:
- I2Eye is doubled over, hands on his knees catching his breath, wheezing.
- I2eye: "*huff* well *huff* maybe *huff* next time. *huff*"
- Page 7
- Panel 1:
- Jack is running onto the football field with a tired/pained expression, the entrance of the field behind him
- Jack: "Coach..."
- Panel 2:
- Jack is doubled over, hands on knees.
- Jack: *huff* I’m here!
- Panel 3:
- Close up shot of the coach looking at down on a clipboard he’s holding marking Jack's attendance.
- Coach: "Great, now where’s the other half of the team?"
- Panel 4:
- Jack looks left and right to an almost empty field, still wheezing, as the coach is tapping his watch.
- Coach: "Thought you'd know since you're almost running late."
- Panel 5:
- Jack is standing up straight, with his hand pointing backwards towards the entrance of the field where he came from
- Jack: "No, I was... in town today... got stuck in... traffic."
- Panel 6:
- Very similar to panel 5, Jack catches a football thrown at him with an "oof".
- Panel 7:
- The camera is zoomed out; Jack stands at the center while his coach walks past him.
- Coach: "Well, we’ve got to make do with what we’ve got."
- Page 8
- Panel 1:
- Jack throws a football over the camera.
- Panel 2:
- (Same angle as 1 but the frame is longer) Jack runs while looking at the entrance of the field.
- Jack (thinking): “Where could Kurt be?”
- Panel 3:
- Mid shot of Jack with a wondering expression.
- Jack (thinking): “Kurt would never miss practice.”
- Panel 4:
- Medium Close-up of Jack, at the background is the word “JACK” blurred out
- Jack (thinking): “Even if he did, he’d tell me. Maybe he-”
- Panel 5:
- The “JACK” at the background is now readable. Jack gets tackled, half his face is off the panel now but he has an expression of surprise, as if his eyes were popping out of his head
- Jack: “OOF!”
- Panel 6:
- Worm’s eye view, the coach looks down at the “camera”
- Coach: “Get your head in the game, kid!”
- Panel 7:
- Bird’s eye view. Jack is still sitting on the ground, the one who tackled him is offering a hand. The coach waves his hands gesturing everyone to leave.
- Coach: “Ah forget it! Everyone hit the showers and let’s call it a day. No use training with more than half of you missing."
- Page 9:
- Notes: The layout of the room would have two single type beds on either side of the room and a single window in the middle.
- Panel 1 (1/3 of the page width, has borders):
- Medium shot of Jack
- Jack opens the door into their room with an exhausted look.
- Panel 2 (1/3 of the page width, has borders):
- (Same angle as panel 1)
- He looks beyond the camera with a surprised expression.
- Jack: "KURT!"
- Panel 3 (1/3 of the page width, has borders):
- Kurt is sitting on his bed, looking up at Jack.
- The speech balloon is connected to the first one from Panel 2.
- Jack: "Where have you been, man?"
- Panel 4 (1/2 page width):
- Camera is low angled showing Kurt’s back as Jack walks in front of him with his arms out and shoulders raised (the “what?” or "asking" pose).
- Jack: "Man, coach is pissed! Nearly half of the team was a no-show for training and-"
- Panel 5 (1/2 page width):
- Camera is over the shoulder of Jack looking down on Kurt.
- Kurt cuts Jack off.
- Kurt: "Listen, I’ve had a long day and I would appreciate if you can let me rest."
- Panel 6 (1/2 page width):
- Camera: Low angle, showing Kurt lying down and Jack at the back.
- Jack: "Sure, man. My bad."
- Panel 7 (1/2 page width):
- Same framing as panel 6 where Jack looks down at a clock in their room which displayed 10:23 PM
- Page 10:
- Note: Try to match Jack’s pose in each panel (3-7) (Spongebob office worker reference?)
- Panel 1 (1/3 page width):
- 7AM
- Medium full shot of Jack sitting on his bed, slightly hunched with one hand rubbing his eyes. Alarm still going off.
- Panel 2 (1/3 width):
- 8AM
- Jack eating at a table in the cafeteria more hunched over, spoon up to his mouth.
- Panel 3 (1/3 width):
- 9AM
- Jack in class, still hunched, with an arm supporting his head and the other hand holding a pen.
- Panel 4 (1/3 width):
- 11AM
- A professor is standing behind Jack with a worried/confused expression and a questioning pose.
- Panel 5 (1/3):
- 3PM
- Jack sitting on a bench in his football gear with his helmet in his lap.
- Panel 6 (1/3):
- 8PM
- Nighttime. Jack sitting on his bed similar to panel 3, he’s in his sleep attire, starting at Kurt’s empty bed.
- Panel 7 (1/3):
- 8:30PM
- Jack sitting at his desk, even more hunched over, still supporting his head with one arm and the phone up to his ear in the other.
- Panel 8 (1/3):
- Low angle, close up shot of Jack’s face looking at his phone.
- Panel 9 (1/3):
- Extreme Close Up showing phone screen with Kurt’s name on the contact declining Jack’s call.
- Jack shouts "COME ON!"
- He just keeps getting lower and lower in each panel until finally he snaps a little.
- Page 11
- Panel 1:
- Jack is angrily walking down the hallway.
- Jack: "I’m going to see the dean about this extra credit-"
- Panel 2:
- As he rounds the corner his expression shifts from angry to confused.
- Jack: "thing..."
- Panel 3:
- A crowd is swarming the dean who has his hands up defensively trying to field all the complaints being shouted at him at once. One prominent figure is a young dark skinned woman with a partial afro who's shadow is slightly off.
- Dean: "People, please, all your fellow students are currently in an extracurricular activity and-"
- Panel 4:
- Close up of the young woman who is pointing accusatorily at the dean, not full arm pointing, but bent elbow finger pointing. Her shadow is still somewhat wrong. The dean is in the foreground closer to the camera, he's sweating with a pained smile trying to defuse the situation.
- Stella: "Bullshit! I know that Brad ain’t the type to attend those!" (See image reference Shade from the Mean Teens)
- Dean: "Ms. Teague, I can assure you that he does. In fact, why don’t all of you try and participate? There are still vacant slots on the busses headed there right now."
- Panel 5:
- Close up of Jack, he has this determined expression on his face as he walks away from the corner he stopped at while the crowd of people clamor on in the background.
- Jack: "Looks like I’ve got a bus to catch."
- Page 12
- Panel 1:
- Jack, now wearing his superhero outfit, is lurking behind the bushes where the busses are parked. Two goons are talking in the foreground.
- Goon 1: I think that’s the last of them.
- Goon 2: Let’s move out, people are getting suspicious.
- Panel 2 (1/3):
- Bird’s eye view of the busses leaving the parking lot.
- Panel 3 (1/3):
- NOTE: The bus that Jack is on is the last in the convoy.
- Frame shows the front of the bus, showing the driver and a goon standing beside him.
- Panel 4 (1/3):
- Same frame as Panel 3 but with Jack mid transition of standing up, using his sledgehammer to assist.
- Panel 5 (full width):
- Jack in a fighting stance two-handing his sledgehammer, with a resolute expression as his scarf is blown by the wind and the sun behind his back.
- TO BE CONTINUED
- ---------------------------------------------------------Part 2--------------------------------------------------------
- PAGE 1:
- Panel 1:
- A line of busses enters a dimly lit warehouse, the open air no air conditioning sort. We can see Jack on the roof of the last bus.
- Panel 2:
- Jack leaps up from the roof of the bus as if he were flying into the dark ceiling of the warehouse.
- Panel 3:
- Jack keeps floating upwards reaching out for and grabbing onto one of the support beams.
- Panel 4:
- A shot of Jack looking over his shoulder at the lines of people filling out of the buses below. Jack is out of focus in this panel. There are armed guards surrounding the students, all of them are wearing helmets with visors that hide their eyes.
- The guards are shouting "Line up! Your tasks will be assigned soon!"
- Panel 5:
- Bird’s eye view of the warehouse, there's a large stage with a screen behind it with a logo being projected onto it of a large, stylized eye surrounded by beads and light radiating from it.
- The title 'Eye of the Cult: Part II' appears appears in the corner of this panel.
- PAGE 2:
- Panel 1:
- The eye on the screen pulses as words echo from the speakers throughout the warehouse. "I welcome you all. Apologies I could not be there in person to oversee your integration, so please follow my associate's orders as if they were my own."
- Panel 2:
- Another man takes the stage in front of the projection. He's wearing a bulbous helmet that obscures his eyes with the same logo painted over where his forehead would be.
- Cataract: "Thank you, master I2Eye. I am Cataract, your new boss! You will be assigned roles based on your aptitude. Those in engineering, mathematics, or other technical fields will be assisting with assembly. Those with special attributes will be assisting in the special program. Everyone else, guard training."
- Panel 3:
- Shot of the crowd, most have a dull, drooling look on their faces, but way in the back someone is shouting "This isn't what I signed up for!"
- Panel 4:
- Same shot, but one of the people in the crowd has turned to look at the person who shouted as they are dragged away by the guards.
- Panel 5:
- Shot from the side as the person who turned around is also grabbed by a guard.
- PAGE 3
- Panel 1:
- Jack has to stop himself from jumping down immediately upon seeing the people being hauled away by armed guards through a side door. He grips the metal rafter harder, making a fist with his other hand.
- JH (thinking): "Steady, I don't know what's going on yet. These guys have guns and there are a lot of people down there."
- Panel 2:
- Jack crawls and monkey bars his way across the ceiling to the far wall above the door. Down below Cataract is issuing commands.
- Cataract: "Send them to the waiting rooms so that they may be ready when master I2Eye returns to finish their orientation."
- Panel 3:
- Close up of one of the guards swiping a key card to open the door, the two people grabbed earlier are being held on each arm by a pair of guards each, they're sweating with the guns around them.
- Panel 4:
- Jack uses his hammer and density manipulating powers to punch a hole through the aluminum siding making up the exterior walls of the warehouse and pries it open like a can-opener.
- Panel 5:
- The perspective is a worm's eye view from inside of a jail cell as one guard is shoving the pair into the jail cell, behind him are two of the other guards and above them is Jack leaping down from above with them unaware.
- PAGE 4
- Panel 1:
- Jack lands behind the two guards, placing one hand on each of their backs.
- Panel 2:
- Both guards are down on the ground with their arms sinking through the floor. There are gravity lines on them to show how much denser Jack has made them and ripples in the floor to show how much less dense it has become from Jack's powers.
- Panel 3:
- Jack has launched himself into a tackle and slammed the third guard into the jail cell bars.
- Panel 4:
- Jack is opening the jail cell and letting the two out, handing them one of the key cards.
- JH: "Stay hidden, find a phone, call the police."
- Panel 5:
- The two former prisoners are running off panel as Jack is looking down at the guard he tacked.
- Student (semi-off panel): "I think they put our stuff in these lock boxes."
- Panel 6:
- Jack has knelt down and removed the guard's helmet, he's unconscious but otherwise fine. Jack has a surprised look on the part of his face we can see.
- JH: "Oh what? Are you Doug? Sorry man... I gotta find Kurt before he ends up like this."
- PAGE 5
- Panel 1:
- Kurt is standing over a table with some kind of device under a magnifying lens. He's using tiny tools for the tiny screws going into it. Kurt has bags under his eyes and is mumbling to himself "Quota... quota... quota..."
- Panel 2:
- Same scene, but in the background Jack drops down behind Kurt. He lands in a crouched position.
- JH: "Kurt?"
- Panel 3:
- Jack has run over to where Kurt is and is shaking him by the shoulder. Kurt is unphased and is still trying to use the tiny screwdriver even while his hands are far away from the table.
- JH: "Kurt!"
- Panel 4:
- Kurt has raised his hands and is shoving Jack away. Jack is taking a step back from the sudden resistance.
- JH: "Kurt! What've they done to you?"
- Kurt: "I gotta... make quota..."
- Panel 5
- Jack is reaching into his belt/pouches and pulling out a water bottle.
- JH: "At least drink this, man. You're totally dehydrated."
- Panel 6
- Jack is lifting the bottle to his friend's lips, but Kurt is once again trying to push him away, causing the water to spill all over his face in the struggle.
- JH: "Drink the water, Kurt!"
- Kurt: "Quota!"
- PAGE 6
- Panel 1
- Close up of Kurt's face, he's totally soaked with water dripping off of his brow down over his eyelids which are squeezed shut. His face is scrunched up and he's making a "PHHHHFFFT" out of his mouth.
- Panel 2
- Jack has his hands on Kurt's shoulders as Kurt is reaching up with both hands to wick the water off of his eyes.
- JH: "Kurt?"
- Kurt: "Yeah. I'm awake now. What-"
- Panel 3
- Kurt is spinning his head around looking at his surroundings. Jack has a smile on his face, visibly relieved.
- Kurt: "Where. Where are we?"
- JH: "You don't remember?"
- Panel 4
- Flashback panel. Inside of a school auditorium with the man from the previous issue who tried to talk with Jack up on stage. He's making a triangle sign with his hands over his forehead which radiates out over the crowd.
- Kurt (off panel): "Last thing I remember was attending that internship seminar. It was hot garbage. Then this guy walked on stage and..."
- Panel 5
- Kurt his holding his head, in his other hand he's taking the water bottle from Jack.
- Kurt: "Buses... something about assembly quotas?"
- JH: "That was yesterday, these guys... are kidnappers. Their boss has some kinda mind power, I think."
- Panel 6
- Kurt is holding one of the devices he was assembling, inspecting it. It looks like a toy ray-gun. Jack is holding his hammer looking back up at the ceiling.
- Kurt: "Man, a whole day in an assembly line."
- JH: "The guy in charge here is called Cataract. I'm gonna go find him and kick his ass. Maybe that'll wake everyone up."
- Kurt: "I'll see what I can do if it doesn't."
- PAGE 7 (this page may been to be broken up)
- Panel 1
- The angle is looking down from the ceiling. In the manager's office, which has big fans blowing and several monitors illuminating the room, Cataract is on the phone. He's sitting in a swivel chair, leaning forward, his head down.
- Cataract: "Yes, master. Two of them. Yes, they are isolated. No, no signs of powers. Yes, we will keep them under watch. Glory to the All Seeing Eye."
- Panel 2
- The angle is from the front. Lights from the monitors are illuminating Cataract as he relaxes into his chair breathing a sigh of relief.
- Cataract: *Sigh* "One day. One day I will be elevated above such menial tasks. The success of this plant will be the first step in my ascension from a Blind Eye to Master I2Eye's Third Eye."
- Panel 3
- Cataract is suddenly pinned to his chair by a sledgehammer handle being held from behind the chair. Jack is holding the hammer across Cataract's chest and pulling him into the chair to immobilize him.
- JH: "So you're not really in charge of all this, bummer."
- Cataract: "Why... do I feel so heavy? A super?"
- Panel 4
- Small panel, close up of Cataract's hand reaching for a toy ray gun on his belt.
- Cataract: "You don't even know what you've stumbled into."
- Panel 5
- Cataract has fired the ray gun, a sonic blast is projected from it down into the ground and has chased the chair to go flying across the room, slamming Jack into a wall.
- Panel 6
- Cataract has gotten back to his feet, the floor of the room is all torn up with a gaping hole to the right. He's holding the gun up, pointing it at Jack.
- Cataract: "Capturing a super will surly win Master's favor!"
- PAGE 8
- Panel 1
- Kurt is pushing a dolly loaded up with crates with the ray guns in them. He's doing his best mindless zombie impression as he walks past the armed guards.
- Panel 2
- An assembly line room with mind controlled people working a conveyor-belt. Kurt is knelt down over a crate in the corner of the room next to some other crates.
- Panel 3
- Small panel. Close up of the inside of the crate. It's filled with packing paper and a ray gun. Kurt is flipping a switch on the gun.
- Kurt (thinking): "Sure hope this'll work."
- Panel 4
- Back in the wrecked managers office. Perspective is from behind Cataract who still has the gun pointed at Jack. Jack is crouching down like the football player he is about to do a full body sprint tackle.
- Cataract: "You've seen what this can do!"
- Panel 5
- Jack is in a full sprint, each footstep leaves a visible dent in the floor (at least seven of them behind him already). He's made himself super sense to tank the hit.
- Panel 6
- Close up of Cataract who has pulled back in surprise, still pointing the sonic ray-gun at Jack.
- "Stupid super!"
- Panel 7
- Small panel, close up of the gun in his hand, it's braced with two hands. Click click click. He pulls the trigger and nothing happens.
- Panel 8
- He ineffectively throws the gun at Jack as he turns to start running for the control panel.
- "Worthless battery!"
- Panel 9
- Jack has caught up with him and is slamming him down on the control panel, there are gravity lines the show the weight increase and an imprint forming on the panel.
- PAGE 9
- Panel 1
- Jack is standing over Cataract who's face/helmet is sinking into the control panel. His hands are slowly inching towards a button.
- JH: "Whatever this is, it's over. The police are already on their way."
- Cataract: "That's what you think."
- Panel 2
- Small panel, super close up of Cataract's finger pushing down the intercom button.
- Panel 3
- The angle is slightly from above the assembly line. The mind controlled people are looking up at the loud speakers with dull expressions, the room itself is hazy/fuzzy.
- Cataract, over the intercom: "NEW ORDERS! EVERYONE FIND A WEAPON AND SHOOT TO KILL ANY INTRUDERS!"
- Panel 4
- Kurt is looking up at the ceiling as the new orders are announced. He doesn't notice some of the others noticing him not reaching for a weapon.
- Panel 5
- Kurt is being surrounded by the mind-slaves, armed with crowbars or wooden planks from boxes. He's taken aback with a chocked expression.
- Kurt: "Oh crap!"
- PAGE 10
- Panel 1a, 1b, 1c, 1d
- Four diagonal panels of crates placed in different locations, all with smoke pouring out of them
- Panel 2a, 2b, 2c, 2d
- Four diagonal panels of the smoke reaching the fire alarm sprinklers causing them to go off
- BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP
- Panel 3
- The people who have surrounded Kurt have stopped mid step and have dropped what they were carrying with a lot of "thunks" and "clangs" as they rub their eyes and come to their senses. Kurt is breathing a sigh of relief with a hand to his chest as water drips off of him.
- Panel 4
- The side of Cataract's face is sunken into the control panel as he struggles to look at all of the monitors. One of the monitors shows the scene from panel 3, but worse quality. Other monitors show other rooms and other people coming to, but don't need to be focused on.
- Cataract: "What? No!"
- PAGE 11
- Panel 1
- Wide panel, width of the page at least. The students and other captives of the cult have exited the warehouse, there are police cars, ambulances, and firetrucks surrounding the building. Some of the students are wrapped in blankets and drinking from mugs. Others are talking to the police who have their note pads out.
- Panel 2
- The student who wasn't mind controlled from earlier is telling the police "It was a superhero who got us out and told us to call you. He pushed a guard into the ground!"
- Panel 3
- Doug (the member of the football team who got tackled) is talking to another pair of officers "The last thing I remember was attending an assembly."
- One of the officers: "It's the same story from almost all of them. Something was used on them."
- "Some kind of cult by the sounds of it."
- Panel 4
- Kurt is sitting on the back of an ambulance with a blanket draped over him and a warm mug in his hands. He's thinking, and in his thought bubble is another panel.
- Panel 4b
- Jack is motioning with his thumb behind himself
- "I'm gonna make myself scarce before the cops show up. I'll catch ya later."
- Kurt: "Well... you never did attend the assembly, so you never would have been here."
- PAGE 12
- Panel 1
- Close up of a newspaper front page with a big headline that reads "SUPER HERO SAVES STUDENTS"
- "Eye witness accounts match the description of the up-and-coming new super, JackHammer being on the scene."
- Panel 2
- I2Eye is looking at a tablet reading the article.
- "This town is full of surprises."
- Panel 3
- KillFeed is sitting in front of a monitor with his legs crossed and fingers locked together in his lap. Maybe the static across where his face would be resembles a smile?
- "So your legend grows."
- Panel 4
- In a fancy room with a large desk and armchair by a fireplace, a figure sits, obscured by the open newspaper in his hands. (note: it's Don Darkness)
- "..."
- Panel 5
- Aoko has her hands down on a table with the newspaper spread out on it, her yakuza bodyguard in the foreground sitting down eyeing it.
- Aoko: "See? He'll take our enemies out for us."
- TO BE CONTINUED
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