++ Kufat Age Questioning

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Apr 05 17:52:04 <Ace_james>	hey can i ask you guys something
Apr 05 17:53:17 <@cybersqyd>	Ace_james, what's up?
Apr 05 17:54:18 <Ace_james>	<@cybersqyd is there A spot i can put ideas like i dont wanna make the thing but i just think its A good idea
Apr 05 17:55:55 <Ace_james>	????????????
Apr 05 17:58:10 <@cybersqyd>	Ace_james, not really; you can theoretically put them in the fan work forum; or like, mention them in #site19
Apr 05 17:58:45 <Ace_james>	<@cybersqyd> ok just wanted to know thanks for telling me
Apr 05 17:59:13 <@cybersqyd>	there used to be a page for them (it might still exist) but, it ended up being flooded with low quality ideas so like. we don't generally keep anything like that around nowadays
Apr 05 17:59:18 <@cybersqyd>	also because not many people actually used it
Apr 05 17:59:22 <%Kufat>	Ace_james, what is your current age, please?
Apr 05 18:00:03 <Ace_james>	<%Kufat 19 why
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Apr 05 18:00:39 <%Kufat>	Ace_james: making sure you're old enough to use the server. Also, you don't need to type the angle brackets or
Apr 05 18:00:41 <%Kufat>	sigh
Apr 05 18:00:47 <@cybersqyd>	u tried
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Apr 05 18:01:31 <Ace_james>	sorry i discounnected but why do u want my age
Apr 05 18:01:34 <%Kufat>	Ace_james: making sure you're old enough to use the server. Also, you don't need to type the angle brackets or prefix characters before users' names when you're replying
Apr 05 18:02:07 <%Kufat>	this: "<Ace_james> ????????????" makes you look like you're about ten years old :)
Apr 05 18:02:49 <Ace_james>	i just copy and paste it dose it automatically
Apr 05 18:04:22 <%Kufat>	Ace_james, do you have a Wikidot username, btw?
Apr 05 18:04:32 <Ace_james>	sorry im not used to having to act my age
Apr 05 18:06:47 <Ace_james>	Am I about to be reported for suspicion of being under age
Apr 05 18:15:10 <Ace_james>	%Kufat will I
Apr 05 18:16:43 <%Kufat>	Ace_james, I'm a bit busy with work at the moment, hopefully another staffer will be able to help you
Apr 05 18:17:28 <Ace_james>	ok?????

++ General 17 dumbassery; not too bad but part of a pattern; leads to Malyce age questioning so idk when you wanna stop
Apr 07 17:53:42 <Ace_james>	can i get some help with somthing
Apr 07 17:54:01 <%Hex>	Ace_james: What's up?
Apr 07 17:54:47 <Ace_james>	%Hex so im able to make a sandbox but if i wanna make a idea form thingy what do i do in the sandbox
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Apr 07 17:55:34 <%Hex>	Ace_james: Just write up a concept for an article?
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Apr 07 17:56:27 <@cybersqyd>	Ace_james, you can just copy the template from the required reading into your sandbox if you want to draft an ideas form there
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Apr 07 17:56:34 <Ace_james>	Hex ok i was seeing if there was any rules on it
Apr 07 17:57:05 <@cybersqyd>	you can put whatever you want in the sandbox as long as it's not e.g. racist screeds or other such trolling
Apr 07 17:57:05 <Ace_james>	@cybersqyd thanks
Apr 07 17:57:40 <Ace_james>	ok sorry for takeing up your time

Apr 07 18:05:11 <@MalyceGraves>	Ace_james: How old are you, buddy?
Apr 07 18:07:06 <Ace_james>	@MalyceGraves 19... am i going to get in trouble for suspicion of being under age
Apr 07 18:07:20 <@MalyceGraves>	Yes. Because you told us 18 elsewhere. Which is it?
Apr 07 18:07:37 <Ace_james>	els were?
Apr 07 18:07:45 <@MalyceGraves>	I'll also have you know  I believe neither number to be correct.
Apr 07 18:07:52 <Ace_james>	were els have i told you im 18
Apr 07 18:08:00 <@MalyceGraves>	Does that matter?
Apr 07 18:09:06 <@MalyceGraves>	Ace_james: so, which is it?
Apr 07 18:09:18 <Ace_james>	im 19
Apr 07 18:09:39 <Ace_james>	but were have I told you im 18
Apr 07 18:09:55 <@MalyceGraves>	And yet, you have twice wondered about being under suspicion of being underage. Mayhap you realize that your charade is unconvincing.
Apr 07 18:11:28 <@MalyceGraves>	https://www.irccloud.com/pastebin/dyX01js8/
Apr 07 18:11:46 <Ace_james>	no its just everyone ive seen get asked what there age is they get in trouble of suspicion of being underage
Apr 07 18:11:49 <@MalyceGraves>	Right here. You told celeste you were 18 when you applied for the sandbox, and now you're telling me 19.
Apr 07 18:11:55 <@MalyceGraves>	And thus, you lied.
Apr 07 18:14:27 <Ace_james>	no my birthday was march 27 and i can proove it
Apr 07 18:15:01 <Ace_james>	im not lieing
Apr 07 18:15:13 <@MalyceGraves>	Ace_james: well, now you can appeal to another operator.
Apr 07 18:16:04 <Ace_james>	but i didnt do anything wrong

++ Critters from here on out

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Mar 08 15:27:33 <Ace_james>	How do I show mine
Mar 08 15:27:33 <Alongname>	Having a good idea about your story or rather what you want to tell with it, is a great way to get greenlights.
Mar 08 15:27:55 <Limeyy>	do you have a draft or a idea post ace?
Mar 08 15:28:01 <Top>	Does anyone have any good components or code for paper I can use? I tried using the one on 5555, but the page I have it on has been loading slowly ever since I implemented it
Mar 08 15:28:17 <Ace_james>	I have a thingy in sandbox
Mar 08 15:28:27 <Mars>	.s style resource
Mar 08 15:28:28 <%Secretary_Helen>	Mars: SCP Style Resource (Rating: +383. Written 3 years ago By: 7happy7 and s d locke) - http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-style-resource
Mar 08 15:28:33 <Mars>	Top: ^^
Mar 08 15:28:37 <Limeyy>	has it been greenlit Ace_james ?
Mar 08 15:28:41 <Mars>	There's a bit of code in here that would work.
Mar 08 15:29:13 <Ace_james>	I don't think so
Mar 08 15:29:15 <Top>	Oh, thank you! Completely forgot about that page
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Mar 08 15:30:21 <Limeyy>	I'd heavily recommend the greenlight process discussed here to develop your idea and make sure it would make a good scp: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies
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Mar 08 15:30:46 <Limeyy>	either way, I'm happy to take a quick general crit of your draft
Mar 08 15:31:50 <Ace_james>	wait sorry im slow what am i doing
Mar 08 15:32:44 <Limeyy>	just shoot me a link to your sandbox
Mar 08 15:33:13 <Limeyy>	but as a heads up, if the idea has not been greenlit I may focus on more conceptual things than overall crit
Mar 08 15:33:24 <Ace_james>	ok
Mar 08 15:33:50 <Ace_james>	umm... how do i send u the link i still kinda new to this
Mar 08 15:33:52 <Limeyy>	and I would heavily recommend the greenlighting process, as most critters will not look at a draft that hasn't gone through it
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Mar 08 15:33:58 <Limeyy>	copy the link and paste it in this chat
Mar 08 15:34:04 <MauroManifold>	Oop
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Mar 08 15:34:14 <MauroManifold>	I need a critter but it can wait
Mar 08 15:34:33 <Ace_james>	http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/ace-james

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Apr 01 15:26:11 <Mars>	Anyone got time for a 5.2k draft about a rescue mission in another dimension?
Apr 01 15:30:21 <Ace_james>	<Mars i could read it im not a critter but i could give u my personal opoin
Apr 01 15:30:30 <Mars>	We're all critters here
Apr 01 15:30:39 <Mars>	As long as you're literate
Apr 01 15:30:41 <Mars>	http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/the-hunters-workshop
Apr 01 15:30:42 <Mars>	First tab
Apr 01 15:32:10 <Ace_james>	<Mars> i type faster then my brain processes so i sometimes make a few mistakes
Apr 01 15:33:31 <Mars>	And thank you for the read
Apr 01 15:34:07 <Ace_james>	<Mars ok me reading this will literary take an hour but ill try my best to read it
Apr 01 15:34:25 <Lapiz>	Question: (not related to any crit) but does anyone have the message “I hacked into it database” in the home page of the scp wiki?
Apr 01 15:35:37 <TawnyOwlJones>	Lapiz: yes, it's an april fools joke
Apr 01 15:35:40 <Ace_james>	yes <Lapiz i pretty sure its just a joke
Apr 01 15:35:55 <Lapiz>	Ah, well they got me............ shoot
Apr 01 15:42:41 <Ace_james>	<Mars so im readying this and i just got to the Introduction and if u want them to stay on for longer your gonna wanna add something that catches there interest i will read the rest but add something in like the discirptoin r at the very begging of the intro so they dont get bred and click off
Apr 01 15:46:49 <Mars>	Ace_james: What would you suggest?
Apr 01 15:49:32 <Ace_james>	<Mars i dont really have suggestoins i would just say shorten something before The Re-Exploration vote or just add something that really makes them wanna read more because if i was normaly reading this i would have clicked off when i started the intro
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Apr 01 15:51:48 <Gloogoo>	hello
Apr 01 15:52:01 <+Cyvstvi>	Precisely.
Apr 01 15:52:09 <ClockworkMage>	As it stands, I stopped short of including enough hints to ever make the guess.
Apr 01 15:52:12 <Gloogoo>	i have an idea you guys might want to review
Apr 01 15:52:25 <Ace_james>	<Mars but as soon as u start the footage i would say that its pretty good  and as soon as you get there i would keep reading but u just wanna get something that keeps them there
Apr 01 15:52:50 <Ace_james>	<Gloogoo lets see it
Apr 01 15:52:57 <ClockworkMage>	I absolutely refuse to plaster stickers and logos all over it.
Apr 01 15:52:57 <Gloogoo>	thanks
Apr 01 15:52:58 <Mars>	Hm.
pr 01 15:53:18 <Gloogoo>	So, it's this ink eating monster that came from a family's basement
Apr 01 15:53:21 <+Cyvstvi>	Same here.
Apr 01 15:53:23 <Gloogoo>	and this infinite pen
Apr 01 15:53:32 <Gloogoo>	pen is SCP-xxxx-a
Apr 01 15:53:36 <ClockworkMage>	Isn't there already a magic infinite pen?
Apr 01 15:53:38 <+Cyvstvi>	I don't personally like that style either. I'm more minimalist with my writing.
Apr 01 15:53:41 <Gloogoo>	really?
Apr 01 15:53:44 <Gloogoo>	uhm
Apr 01 15:53:44 <TawnyOwlJones>	.tell Limeyy congrats on reviewer's spotlight :D
Apr 01 15:53:44 <%Secretary_Helen>	TawnyOwlJones: *Jots that down on her clipboard* Got it, I'll let them know...
Apr 01 15:53:45 <Ace_james>	<Mars sorry if what is said was cunfuseing
Apr 01 15:53:47 <ClockworkMage>	Architect's pen.
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Apr 01 15:53:52 <Gloogoo>	.s infinite pen
Apr 01 15:53:52 <%Secretary_Helen>	Gloogoo: I'm sorry, I couldn't find anything.
Apr 01 15:53:52 <ClockworkMage>	It's magic and it's a pen.
Apr 01 15:53:56 <Gloogoo>	hmm
Apr 01 15:54:04 <+Cyvstvi>	Gloogoo: I'd recommend using the idea forums for these kind of concepts rather than spitballing at us.
Apr 01 15:54:22 <ClockworkMage>	I think this is more for critique of written work.
Apr 01 15:54:23 <Lapiz>	Question: When containing a humanoid extraterrestrial, is saying “standard humanoid containment cell” and a few extra things specifically for it, enough to say?
Apr 01 15:54:30 <ClockworkMage>	It can be.
Apr 01 15:54:47 <+Cyvstvi>	Do you need to specify the containment measures?
Apr 01 15:54:49 <+Cyvstvi>	If so, yes.
Apr 01 15:54:56 <ClockworkMage>	If it doesn't have to factor into the thing you're describing, it's often best to be brief and refer to a standard template.
Apr 01 15:54:58 <Gloogoo>	hmm
Apr 01 15:55:03 <Gloogoo>	ok then
Apr 01 15:56:38 <Mars>	Ace_james: It wasn't, it was helpful.
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Apr 01 15:56:48 <Mars>	Was there anything else?
Apr 01 15:57:52 <Ace_james>	no i think its a great start just make some adjustments and i think it could really be amaing
Apr 01 15:58:43 <Ace_james>	i can read another article if someone wants me too
Apr 01 15:59:25 <Parad00xx>	Mars From what I've read of it, I like the idea. I have spotted a few grammar mistakes, not many, but that's about the only or main issue I've seen so far. If you'd like, I can edit the mistakes I've spotted. Yet, like I said, I like the concept and find it rather interesting.
Apr 01 16:00:25 <Parad00xx>	Also, I have an idea on the forums, if anyone would be willing to look at it and give me feedback on it.
Apr 01 16:00:42 <Ace_james>	i could
Apr 01 16:00:55 <Mars>	I would appreciate that, but alas you can't edit my sandbox.
Apr 01 16:01:34 <Parad00xx>	Ah, forgot about that. Would you like me to point out the few ones I've found to you?
Apr 01 16:01:41 <Parad00xx>	And, here's the link to my idea.
Apr 01 16:01:53 <Parad00xx>	http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14038784/scp-idea:ailment-a-severe-genetic-alteration
Apr 01 16:02:07 <Ace_james>	ok ill read that
Apr 01 16:02:45 <Parad00xx>	Thank you, it's greatly appreciated.
Apr 01 16:05:00 <Ace_james>	dont worry about it i like reading original ideas
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Apr 01 16:11:50 <Ace_james>	<Parad00xx I like the idea I can't think of something to help improve it just if u do follow throw with writing it just make sure you add so narrative to it and your not just describing it
Apr 01 16:14:00 <Parad00xx>	Ace_james Alright, thank you.
Apr 01 16:16:02 <Ace_james>	<Parad00xx> thanks for the read
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Apr 01 16:18:02 <Lapiz>	Ace_james: would you like to take a look at a scp idea of mine?
Apr 01 16:18:17 <Lapiz>	Ah, they left
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Apr 01 16:19:17 <Ace_james>	im back
Apr 01 16:19:39 <Lapiz>	Ah, well are you free to give crit?
Apr 01 16:19:44 <Ace_james>	sorry wifi went out but i would love to take a look
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Apr 01 16:20:04 <Ace_james>	<Lapiz> yess
Apr 01 16:20:04 <Lapiz>	Aight here: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14038097/the-moon-s-artist-seeking-greenlight
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Apr 01 16:26:46 <Ace_james>	<Lapiz> im sorry somthing just came up if u wait about 15 mins i would love to take some time to read it
Apr 01 16:26:56 <Lapiz>	Alright
Apr 01 16:27:13 <Ace_james>	sorry
Apr 01 16:27:19 <Lapiz>	It’s fine
Apr 01 16:27:33 <Lapiz>	I understand you have other irl stuff going on
Apr 01 16:27:33 <Ace_james>	ill be back in 15
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Apr 01 16:42:09 <Ace_james>	<Lapiz ok im ganna start reading that now
Apr 01 16:48:11 <Ace_james>	<Lapiz i would keep thinking because i dont think you will have much to write with that i like the idea you just need more of it
Apr 01 16:50:25 <Lapiz>	Well during the SCPs interview I plan on trying to explain the type of society that it had to live through before arriving to earth. Doing this, I casually slip in the narrative that I explain in the thread
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Apr 01 16:50:52 <Lapiz>	Though do you have any other suggestions?
Apr 01 16:54:45 <Ace_james>	well adding that to the interview will make it better i didnt really have more suggestions just when/if u follow throw with it make sure to not only describe it
Apr 01 16:57:22 <Lapiz>	Oh I don’t intend to do that, I know it’s just gonna be an exposition dump if I did. I plan on using the actions and drawings made by XXXX to potray its emotions and then, it trying to explain those drawings, which leads to the researcher conducting interviews
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Apr 01 16:59:42 <Ace_james>	so kinda like SCP-2521
Apr 01 17:01:13 <Ace_james>	<Lapiz>
Apr 01 17:02:57 <Lapiz>	Kind of, the images will mostly be my drawings and if the interview is regarding one of XXXXs drawings or “manifestions”, the image will be shown right on top of the interview log, for context
Apr 01 17:02:57 <Lapiz>	Kind of, the images will mostly be my drawings and if the interview is regarding one of XXXXs drawings or “manifestions”, the image will be shown right on top of the interview log, for context
Apr 01 17:03:51 <Ace_james>	thats acully really cool i like that
Apr 01 17:05:42 <Lapiz>	Thanks, I’ll try to get more crit and after that I hope to get it greenlight
Apr 01 17:05:46 <Lapiz>	....hopefully
Apr 01 17:06:21 <Ace_james>	well if it dose get green lighted i deffinitly wanna see that
Apr 01 17:06:55 <Lapiz>	Ok, I’ll make sure to notify, when i make the draft for it
Apr 01 17:07:22 <Ace_james>	sorry if i wasent helpfull
Apr 01 17:09:05 <Lapiz>	No it’s fine, your questions actually made me think some minor changes for the flow of the narrative, so thanks
Apr 01 17:09:51 <Ace_james>	oh! ok well i wish u the best of the luck with that
Apr 01 17:10:02 <Lapiz>	Thanks:)
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Apr 01 17:11:48 <Ace_james>	ill be here most of the time so if it dose happen i want t see that
Apr 01 17:13:03 <Lapiz>	Alright
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Apr 01 17:19:27 <Ace_james>	i can give some crit if anybody wants me to
Apr 01 19:40:16 <Ace_james>	<Rowan_Oathsworn that's not really my style as i don't really like stuff like that but there plenty of people that do so ill let someone els read it
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Apr 01 19:40:49 <daneiltherat>	Heyo!
Apr 01 19:41:13 <Ace_james>	u the guy that had trouble getting here from site 17???
Apr 01 19:41:21 <Rowan_Oathsworn>	Fair - to each their own, Ace_james 😁
Apr 01 19:41:31 <daneiltherat>	I have an SCP idea but I'm still working on some of the details
Apr 01 19:42:01 <Ace_james>	<daneiltherat> i can look
Apr 01 19:42:13 <Ace_james>	<Rowan_Oathsworn thanks for under standing
Apr 01 19:42:33 <daneiltherat>	I don't have a draft yet. I'm still in the brainstorming stage. That's why I was here
Apr 01 19:42:58 <Ace_james>	well d u have an idea page thing
Apr 01 19:43:05 <Ace_james>	do you
Apr 01 19:43:26 <daneiltherat>	Not yet. Like I said, I'm still brainstorming
Apr 01 19:44:39 <Ace_james>	well i would say fill out one of the idea page thingy post the link here and i can take a look
Apr 01 19:45:14 <daneiltherat>	I'm still working on the idea. I know what I want to be, but i would like feedback before I fill anything out to see what works and what doesn't
Apr 01 19:46:40 <daneiltherat>	Hope that's ok
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Apr 01 19:48:29 <Ace_james>	well look when u fill out one of the idea whatever, its not the final thing u can change the whole thing but I guess if you don't have one filled out I guess just tell me
Apr 01 19:50:27 <Ace_james>	u seem pretty new to writing scps so just tell me your idea
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Apr 01 19:51:11 <Penton>	Hello, anyone available for critique?
Apr 01 19:51:18 <Penton>	I have a draft: http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-14034538/scp-draft:ms-memory
Apr 01 19:51:27 <Ace_james>	<Penton i got you
Apr 01 19:51:43 <Penton>	Ace_james thanks
Apr 01 19:52:06 <Ace_james>	no problem i like reading the little short thing
Apr 01 19:52:15 <daneiltherat>	That's half the issue. I have one part done, the effect, but not the cause. It's a thing that causes Magic The Gathering cards to summon real creatures and cause real damage.  Lightning bolts actually hurt and such. You die if you're Life reached 0 and go comatose if your library (deck) has no cards in it. The thing that causes the effect creates a -
Apr 01 19:52:28 <Penton>	Mine? It's not very short though
Apr 01 19:52:30 <Penton>	more medium
Apr 01 19:52:32 <daneiltherat>	Spectral judge to prevent cheating and such
Apr 01 19:52:36 <Penton>	mostly the interview log
Apr 01 19:52:49 <Penton>	unless I'm catching a completely different conversation
Apr 01 19:53:15 <daneiltherat>	I'm not sure what should cause the effect. I was thinking some crystal or item that causes the effect when near the cards.
Apr 01 19:53:18 <Ace_james>	<Penton well try reading on that has over 5mill words
Apr 01 19:53:41 <daneiltherat>	The object is Safe. The effect only activates when MTG cards are near it.
Apr 01 19:53:53 <daneiltherat>	Hope I haven't spammed
Apr 01 19:54:01 <Penton>	Ace_james which one is that?
Apr 01 19:54:22 <Rowan_Oathsworn>	Penton Did you get your draft idea greenlit?
Apr 01 19:54:32 <Ace_james>	<daneiltherat well just keep thinking we cant really give u the ideas
Apr 01 19:54:48 <Penton>	Rowan_Oathsworn Didn't need to
Apr 01 19:55:08 <Ace_james>	<Penton> well it was someones draft idk
Apr 01 19:55:21 <Rowan_Oathsworn>	Ah sorry - it's just that I see peeps telling others all the time to get their stuff greenlit so I thought I'd help 😅
Apr 01 19:55:23 <Penton>	Ace_james Wow.
Apr 01 19:55:44 <Penton>	Rowan_oathsworn No worries, thanks!
Apr 01 19:55:54 <Ace_james>	<Penton> it took me 24 mins to finish
Apr 01 19:56:39 <daneiltherat>	 What do you think of my idea? Would something like a crystal globe work? Or maybe some kind of lightbulb. Makes the cards real when their in it's light
Apr 01 19:58:00 <daneiltherat>	Yeah,a lightbulb could work
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Apr 01 19:58:42 <Ace_james>	<Penton> so i would say your only dicribeing it i would add more narrite
Apr 01 19:59:06 <Ace_james>	describing
Apr 01 19:59:11 <Penton>	Ace_james What part?
Apr 01 20:00:16 <Ace_james>	anywhere really the whole thing is like 1 big disciptoin i had that problem with my first one so i would sy just like add story
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Apr 01 20:00:35 <Penton>	Ace_james What tab are you reading?
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Apr 01 20:04:32 <Ace_james>	<Penton oh i just noticed there other tabs sorry i only read the 1st one

Apr 02 14:53:38 <chaucer345>	So is anyone about who would be interested in doing a line by line crit of the Wandsmen GOI hub? It's framed as an orientation meeting for new recruits.
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Apr 02 15:31:09 <Ace_james>	<chaucer345> ???
Apr 02 15:31:56 <chaucer345>	Ace_james did you want to take a look?
Apr 02 15:32:44 <Ace_james>	idk what the GOI hub is
Apr 02 15:34:51 <chaucer345>	Ace_james It's a place where tales/skips from a group of interest to the foundation are collected. They often include GOI descriptions and setting details.
Apr 02 15:35:43 <Ace_james>	ok...
Apr 02 15:36:52 <chaucer345>	As an example I did not make: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/goc-hub-page


Apr 05 18:24:57 <Ace_james>	whats that little killer vodude dull scp thingy
Apr 05 18:29:17 <@ManyMeats>	What?
Apr 05 18:32:40 <Ace_james>	never mind forget i said that

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Apr 05 19:36:35 <chaucer345>	Anyone up for reading a quick draft of a Wondertainment Game Review?
Apr 05 19:36:53 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 im free
Apr 05 19:37:34 <chaucer345>	Ace_james Awesome: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/game-on
Apr 05 19:37:55 <chaucer345>	Let me know what you think!
Apr 05 19:38:02 <Ace_james>	ok ill read it
Apr 05 19:38:20 <Ace_james>	THAT GAME ON SIGH IS COOL
Apr 05 19:41:11 <chaucer345>	Thanks!
Apr 05 19:46:32 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 IM NOT SURE IF THIS IS ON PURPOSE BUT YOU SAID EARWIG
Apr 05 19:46:38 <Ace_james>	oops sorry capslock
Apr 05 19:46:50 <chaucer345>	Yup.
Apr 05 19:47:05 *	DrXeve gives Ace_james a third swordfish
Apr 05 19:47:13 <chaucer345>	The game is an earwig that tries to show you your greatest fears, but isn't very good at it.
Apr 05 19:47:42 <Ace_james>	ok let me finsh the last few paraghs
Apr 05 19:50:16 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 so is this A draft or an idea
Apr 05 19:50:37 <chaucer345>	Ace_james A draft.
Apr 05 19:50:54 <chaucer345>	It's sort of a "GoI format" for the Wandsmen.
Apr 05 19:51:41 <chaucer345>	They're interdimensional reporters.
Apr 05 19:52:30 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 well i think its A good short read its my kind of story
Apr 05 19:52:53 <chaucer345>	Any thoughts on stuff I could do to clean it up before posting?
Apr 05 19:54:45 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 well wandsman is A scp already right
Apr 05 19:55:20 <chaucer345>	They have appeared in multiple published articles at this point, yes.
Apr 05 19:57:37 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 ive only read 1 tale ever but wouldent this work better as a tale
Apr 05 19:57:59 <chaucer345>	It is a tale.
Apr 05 19:58:32 <Ace_james>	oh sorry i didnt noticed that i thought u said it was a scp
Apr 05 19:59:14 <chaucer345>	Nope, it's just a column the Wandsmen write.
Apr 05 20:00:02 <Ace_james>	well then yes i think it perfect i would just proof read it to make sure theres no errors and or thinks you want to change then i would publish
Apr 05 20:03:09 <TawnyOwlJones>	chaucer345: do you want me to look at your draft?
Apr 05 20:03:33 <chaucer345>	TawnyOwlJones Sure!
Apr 05 20:03:46 <TawnyOwlJones>	just general vibes etc?
Apr 05 20:03:54 <chaucer345>	Do you want the short article or the GOI hub in that case?
Apr 05 20:04:17 <chaucer345>	General vibes can be helpful.
Apr 05 20:05:14 <chaucer345>	Also if you see any SPAG errors, please let me know.
Apr 05 20:05:57 <TawnyOwlJones>	i've got the article open. i'm critting cyv's draft tonight as well but i can look at the hub afterwards if i've got time
Apr 05 20:06:30 <chaucer345>	Awesome.
Apr 05 20:06:34 <TawnyOwlJones>	the "general vibes etc" was me assuming you were pretty close to posting. i can LBL if you want?
Apr 05 20:06:38 <+Cyvstvi>	chaucer345: I can give you my crit for the hub in a second if you'd like.
Apr 05 20:06:47 <Ace_james>	chaucer345 what are SPAG errors
Apr 05 20:07:12 <chaucer345>	Spelling and Grammar
Apr 05 20:08:09 <chaucer345>	1 sec
Apr 05 20:09:04 <chaucer345>	Cyvstvi Got a call just as you asked, but yes! I would love to hear it.


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Apr 07 14:10:07 <DrGolden>	http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14040412/tale-concept-getting-time-to-stop Anyone willing to look at a tale concept?
Apr 07 14:19:09 <Ace_james>	DrGolden i can if you want
Apr 07 14:22:47 <Ace_james>	DrGolden i read it do u want to hear what i think
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Apr 07 14:43:41 <Penton>	hi
Apr 07 14:43:52 <Penton>	any experienced dialogue critters here?
Apr 07 14:43:54 <Whomstdveworm>	What's up Penton?
Apr 07 14:44:05 <Penton>	just looking for more dialogue feedback
Apr 07 14:44:45 <Whomstdveworm>	I'm not particularly experienced with critiquing I'm afraid. ^^" I could still give it a look over and give you my feedback though! Just, I wouldn't take it as the end-all-be-all, if that's fair.
Apr 07 14:45:32 <Ace_james>	ya same with me
Apr 07 14:46:13 <Penton>	That's alright. It's just originally I got given plenty of feedback before posting it originally, believing it was good enough. Only for it to turn out that it wasn't. I'm trying to find someone who's kind of an expert when it comes to dialogue specifically. But thanks for the offer!
Apr 07 14:46:17 <DrGolden>	Ace_james sure!
Apr 07 14:50:09 <Ace_james>	DrGolden so i think it will be good for what your going for but you need to find something thats ganna make it stand out from all the other ones because ideas can be really good then you type it out and number reads it so you just need something thats ganna make poeple wanna read yours from the 2895 other love storys
Apr 07 14:50:38 <Ace_james>	nobody nut number
Apr 07 14:50:49 <Ace_james>	not

pr 07 16:18:34 <Ace_james>	anyone have something for me to read im bored
Apr 07 16:20:24 <restlessPraxivist>	Ace_james https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14042575/unknown-caller
Apr 07 16:20:30 <restlessPraxivist>	Only an idea atm
Apr 07 16:20:39 <restlessPraxivist>	But hopefully it suffices
Apr 07 16:26:03 <Ace_james>	<restlessPraxivist it will work
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Apr 07 16:42:31 <HollowDunk>	good morning gentlemen, The name's Hollow Donkey (Hollow Dunk) for short, and I came here to get some reviews for my idea thread since one of staff members (Zyn) has told me to go to this chat room to get some reviews.
Apr 07 16:42:32 <+Cyvstvi>	TawnyOwlJones: I- uh. I don't get it.
Apr 07 16:43:51 <Ace_james>	HollowDunk ok my good sure post the link and ill take a look
Apr 07 16:44:09 <HollowDunk>	thanks Ace_james
Apr 07 16:44:21 <HollowDunk>	http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14040913/my-first-time-being-a-writer#post-4945050
Apr 07 16:47:55 <Limeyy>	yoo mesoamerican anomaly that's my jam. Will take a read rn dunk
Apr 07 16:48:35 <HollowDunk>	thanks Limeyy, should I link my SCP sandbox then?
Apr 07 16:49:19 <Limeyy>	I'd rather just stick to the idea post for now, I don't really read ungreelighted drafts, sorry
Apr 07 16:49:34 <HollowDunk>	it's ok
Apr 07 16:51:31 <Limeyy>	So on the surface here, this appears to just be a monster that runs around and kills people that the Foundation found and stuffed in a box. How does your idea differentiate itself from the other stereotypical murder monsters on the site other than a surface level aztec motif HollowDunk?
Apr 07 16:52:35 <Ace_james>	HollowDunk so you never really got to the point on what its effects are besides it being a skeletin that laughs growns and attacks (unless those are its  effects) you also never put how its contain or if it is contained
Apr 07 16:52:57 <Limeyy>	feel free to answer and talk with james first, I'm not going anywhere
Apr 07 16:53:34 <HollowDunk>	Ace_james, so I have to put the effects? if thats the case then I'll update my thread once more
Apr 07 16:54:19 <Ace_james>	HollowDunk if this is your idea page and not a draft then i would suggest you put its effects
Apr 07 16:54:46 <HollowDunk>	You know, now that I think about it Limeyy, thats a good question, I might do an update of my SCP thread
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Apr 07 16:55:06 <Limeyy>	that's the most important question for a critter
Apr 07 16:55:13 <Limeyy>	what, on a narrative level, do you do differently
Apr 07 16:55:27 <HollowDunk>	Ace_james Understood, BrB

Apr 07 17:00:35 <Ace_james>	HollowDunk to put it in a shorter versoin of what Limeyy said make something that stands out from a mudering monster that gose on a killing spree every now and then