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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some stuff you should work on before you can rank up!
- Now, I want to preface this by saying that modern isnt normally rankable, Though occasionally exceptions are made when modern is done right.
- I do like this plot, but the buildings seem to be too repetitive. Try to break them up by adding some sort of feature or detail somewhere on the building.
- Additionally, make use of all the space on your plot by adding more buildings, or possibly more accents to the plot, such as the blue sphere in the corner.
- Though i do want you to keep in mind that modern isnt normally rankable as i said before, so if someone says to restart, i would x3
- Good luck!
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