RathalosHunter88

Hello RathalosHunter88, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot....

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to towers to barns. You do not have a major structure, and it is needed in order to rank up. You can build any structure you want, as long as it isn't inappropriate. Make sure your structure ad depth/detail. Depth is the layers within a build; you can add depth by incorporating fences, slabs, and stairs. Detail is the little features that give the structure more realism. You add detail to a built my adding buttons and trap doors to the sides of a wall, build.

Organics:
   This is anything living, like animals and trees. Trees are one of the easier organics to make. Your palm trees are good for the initiate rank. I recommend adding some on the hill as well to get rid some of the empty spaces. Good job otherwise.

Terrain:
   This is anything involving the=e ground, like cliffs and hills.  Your hill is great, but after you add a structure, make sure you get rid of the flat area around it. Add more small hills and craters round it to make it more real:)

Other:
   This is anything the does not fit into the previous categories. One thing you might need to watch out for it pallet. Pallet is the blocks chosen to build with that go well with each other. For example, oak wood and gold aren't good block to build a house because they are generally a different theme. ON the other hand, oak wood and stone work well together because the both are in the sane general theme, which is a more natural theme.
   The last thing is that to get rid of all the empty spots all round your plot. You can do this by adding craters and cliffs all around to make it more real. You can also add small structures, like a well or outdoor oven, or more organics to these spots.

Good Luck<3
Tayter_Kat  |  Octovon Jr Mod