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- Hello their XxNoPantsManxX, Tayter_Kat here! I will be reviewing your plot...
- First off, I like the overall idea of your plot, but it seems to be lacking the connection between the worlds.
- Terrain:
- Well the overall terrain seems to be very flat and lacking organics. it would be more interesting if you did hand-made trees and put in more organics like grass or flowers of some sort. Also, adding more hills and holes to add to the plot.
- Buildings:
- The ship above the four world is good, but you can add more depth into it by adding slabs and stairs to make it more appealing. It would also be cool if you moved it from above the plot to where the rest of the buildings are, instead of a separation. The buildings on the bottom are somewhat dull, but if you created more layers and depth, it would add to the building. If you add purposely placed slabs/stairs to the building, it would look amazing.
- Organics:
- If you add more flowers, crops, and/or grass it would add to the pot you already have!
- Work on these few things, and you will do great!
- -Tayter_Kat
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