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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but its not ready for a rank just yet :)
- The tree is good and smooth and the size of the leaves are an okay size for the trunk. The terrain is decent but it would be good to see more levels of terrain on the plot. Cool idea with the squid arms and if they arent squid arms then make sure thats apparent x3 If they are then add some more texture to them with lil suction cups and such :)
- Theres not enough structure on the plot as well. Super cute boat and the house idea is cute too, but there needs to be more structure to show us that youre well rounded as a builder \o/
- Good luck!
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